| "Underground Down Under" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 09, 2002 05:40 CDT
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AGAC. But I also remember seeing AJAC somewhere...ah well, AGAC makes more sense, doesn't it? Anyhow, I'm really looking forward to the mission. This set up deserves an incredible climax -- don't let us down! :) |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 09, 2002 05:24 CDT
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"Oh my god, Sabol thought. She asked me a simple question and I just gave them a sermon. "
That was great! |
Reviewed By: alphavt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 22:32 CDT
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What are you talking about, aragonvaar?
What are you talking about, aragonvaar?
What are you talking about, aragonvaar?
:-D Heh heh, thanks for your continued interest! |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: August 07, 2002 22:22 CDT
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Cool! I especially liked the defiantly "reddish" Alpha, and Sobol's willingness to switch to ACIF markings ;)
Interesting how he's ended up w/ two sets of "human triumvirates" ;) |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: August 06, 2002 19:03 CDT
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The pep talk was especially cool. |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: August 03, 2002 20:08 CDT
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AGACs are kewl :) Nice little explanation of this 'n' that :) |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 01, 2002 13:40 CDT
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And so far, melikes. Thanks for keeping me in the loop with your latest work!
~ Knyte. |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 01, 2002 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alphavt: when I read your work, I think I feel my brain pulsating, because it is meticulously detail-oriented (meaning a lot to pay attention to), and strikes a perfect balance between the technical and humanistic aspects of sci-fi storytelling. Your writing is a joy to read, and I only read your fiction when I know I can give it my all. This morning I have finally managed to do so. Let's see how many more chapters I can fit in. My favorite passage:
“I can tell you’re not enthusiastic about this assignment, Gordon,” Wolff said, actually managing to simulate a bit of concern in his voice.
Simulate?! Ha! I laughed out loud. Lovin your style! |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 09, 2002 05:17 CDT
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I'm not even done reading this yet, but I just wanted to say that seeing Valkyries, Alphas, Hovertanks and an AJAC together is *so* cool. Melikes this a lot! |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: July 28, 2002 16:02 CDT
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Like the "notes" and the AIF pic-very helpful for visualizing this stuff! |
Reviewed By: alex On: July 27, 2002 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a really good idea nice job |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: July 26, 2002 21:21 CDT
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Have their own brand of effectiveness, as this chap. demonstrates :) |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: July 25, 2002 20:23 CDT
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New story, new location, new hero-lots of interesting potential :) |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: August 14, 2002 01:14 CDT
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Great punchline on chapter eight, lots of neat little details here. Keep 'em coming :) |
Reviewed By: alphavt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 08:14 CDT
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Thanks for the comments! AGAC sounds like it should be AJAX, but since it stands for Armored Gyro Assault Coptor, I used AGAC as the acroynm. |
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