| "Underground Down Under" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: aragonvaar On: February 04, 2003 14:47 CST
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I'm looking forward to seeing Jen's "Grave of the Fireflies"-influenced backstory :) |
Reviewed By: aragonvaar On: February 03, 2003 21:22 CST
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Poignant and frightening! |
Reviewed By: mars2172 On: September 17, 2002 18:32 CDT
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Dude, you get an A+ for background info.
Well done and enlightening.
And yes, I admit, the only thing I knew about Australia was that INXS, Midnight Oil, and ACDC came from there.
I stand in awe of your knowledge. :) |
Reviewed By: mars2172 On: September 17, 2002 18:25 CDT
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Finally, had enough time to finish reading all the chapters thus far.
Love it man, and very intriguing.
Nice to see the AJAC again, one of the most underrated mechas in the entire series.
Love the interplay between Sobol and the ACIF, great dialogue.
Great storyline with hints of darkness that tinge New Gen and the Invid Occupation throughout.
'Bridge to Far'- glad to see someone else who knows of that failed campaign and the movie of it.
Keep it up. :) |
Reviewed By: aragonvaar On: September 15, 2002 23:23 CDT
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In this war, everyone has a few skellytons in the closet-hopefully he'll be able to come to terms w/ his.
Moving and very well done. |
Reviewed By: mars2172 On: September 14, 2002 14:28 CDT
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A good intro, sets up situation in tight concise fashion with good usage of established characters. Original characters pique interest enought to warrant continuing reading.
Fun and exciting |
Reviewed By: guntech1 On: August 30, 2002 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a good introduction into the story. Well done for the established characters. |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 09, 2002 05:40 CDT
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AGAC. But I also remember seeing AJAC somewhere...ah well, AGAC makes more sense, doesn't it? Anyhow, I'm really looking forward to the mission. This set up deserves an incredible climax -- don't let us down! :) |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 09, 2002 05:24 CDT
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"Oh my god, Sabol thought. She asked me a simple question and I just gave them a sermon. "
That was great! |
Reviewed By: alphavt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 22:32 CDT
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What are you talking about, aragonvaar?
What are you talking about, aragonvaar?
What are you talking about, aragonvaar?
:-D Heh heh, thanks for your continued interest! |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: August 07, 2002 22:22 CDT
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Cool! I especially liked the defiantly "reddish" Alpha, and Sobol's willingness to switch to ACIF markings ;)
Interesting how he's ended up w/ two sets of "human triumvirates" ;) |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: August 06, 2002 19:03 CDT
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The pep talk was especially cool. |
Reviewed By: Aragonvaar On: August 03, 2002 20:08 CDT
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AGACs are kewl :) Nice little explanation of this 'n' that :) |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 01, 2002 13:40 CDT
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And so far, melikes. Thanks for keeping me in the loop with your latest work!
~ Knyte. |
Reviewed By: Knyte On: August 01, 2002 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alphavt: when I read your work, I think I feel my brain pulsating, because it is meticulously detail-oriented (meaning a lot to pay attention to), and strikes a perfect balance between the technical and humanistic aspects of sci-fi storytelling. Your writing is a joy to read, and I only read your fiction when I know I can give it my all. This morning I have finally managed to do so. Let's see how many more chapters I can fit in. My favorite passage:
“I can tell you’re not enthusiastic about this assignment, Gordon,” Wolff said, actually managing to simulate a bit of concern in his voice.
Simulate?! Ha! I laughed out loud. Lovin your style! |
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