| Title: Beautiful|
Reviewed By: SSProcyonShield On: February 06, 2010 23:35 CST
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
This is a great fic, one I personally plan on rereading multiple times. Touched many good points, characters from the anime stayed in character for most part. The Mary Sue actually had a good and valid point through out the whole time. I've nothing but good things to say about this fic, and I dearly hope the author keeps writing, and updating this great piece of work. The only complaints i can have is that there are some very very small grammer and puncuation errors all of which can be easily over looked. For those looking for a good piece of work, this would be it. And to the Author thank you.