| "Loss and Discovery" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 04:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's good writing, but a bit on the short sight. Try making the next chapter longer
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Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 14:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more soon, i wanna know what happens |
