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Reviewed By: pewter_wings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2010 20:49 CST
Comment/Review:
You are not dead. Lesson learned. Oh man, best line period. Really enjoying your story.
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Reviewed By: bk On: November 28, 2009 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story. I think you really have got the characters attitudes perfect. Please keep up the good work. I will be watching for your updates in the future
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: kagome8905 On: November 26, 2009 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice story, love it
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