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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2010 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that things were going good for kagome and inuyasha... but seems that naraku has found a way to mess with them especially inuyasha... things didn't look good when inuyasha was locked in the room with kagome... good thing kagome didn't back down either... she seems to have gotten through to inuyasha... so now they are real halves again?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2010 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that abi-hime's plan to poison kagome didn't work... what's wrong with kagome?... looks like naraku and abi-hime have devised a plan already... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2010 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that kouga brought abi to the palace... she seems to have tricked them all and plans to kill kagome... looks like kagura went to sesshoumaru and warn him... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that inuyasha & kagome finally reached the palace... interesting meeting they had with suikotsu & kikyo... nice welcome kagome & inuyasha got from the emperor & empress and everyone else... looks like something evil is coming their way again... hope everyone stands strong... sweet that inuyasha & kagome are spending time with each other and their babies... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2010 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG I love this story its so good lol The babies sound so CUTE!!!!!!!! Great update plz update soon ok.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2010 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so inuyasha told kagome that she's cured / no more tumor?... that is good news for them... looks like they are leaving mount hakurei and returning to the palace?... seems that sango went to really check if naraku is dead... he appears to be since she didn't find any traces of him... seems that inuyasha & kagome met sango & kohaku as they left mount hakurei's barrier... why was kagura acting that way with abi-hime?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2010 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please update.... love this story
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 18:17 CST
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chapter 16, when i read it i got the feeling that you just didnt really care anymore, like you where just trying to finish up the story. maybe thats why people thought you where done... its honestly caused me to loose interest a little, but ill keep on reading because i mean hey, ive stuck with it this long, why give up now?
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2010 13:25 CST
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Kikyo wouldn't!...would she? Good update!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 not signed in On: February 26, 2010 22:32 CST
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ahhh! i missed you! lol. thanks for the wonderful update, and can't wait for more! update ASAP! thanks!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2010 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha and kagome are together with their babies... but within a barrier in mount hakurei?... will they ever leave and go back to the palace or cannot at this time?... hope kagome does get well so she can stay with inuyasha and the babies... nice that suikotsu went to the palace to inform everyone... will anyone else be able to go and visit or see kagome & inuyasha and the babies?... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it really the end? you had so much going on.. and left undone.. please keep updating.
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Title: are you done?
Reviewed By: obsessedinuyashafan - offline On: February 16, 2010 04:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the transfer between different events and point of views and flashbacks.. was confusing at points. especially when you used the same breakers for kagome's thoughts repetitively for one chapter. im glad you didnt have sango physically raped. and everyones familys survived. although theres been zero mention of miroku having any family other than his cousin inuyasha. i would like to see you further yourself with this story. what will become of sesshomaru and rin? are you going to just FLASH us to when shes older and theyve fully gotten together or leave it forgotten? what of kagura? did naraku dying mean her own death as well? there wasnt much into his other 'spawn' kanna. i'm glad you went so in depth with inu taisho's past. good thinking to end this chapter NOT in a figurative GASP and allow inuyasha to realize they are his children. but what will become of them now? will suikotsu come with them back to the palace and take over as royal healer? did kikyo have any idea what her father onigumo was up to? her reaction when inuyasha asked if she has spoken to him lately was a bit.. suspiscious. but she seems to have been cast as a 'good guy' which i can totally deal with. please update again soon. and please keep in mind my questions and comments. overall loved the story. very creative and orifinal and kept me up til 5am to read it. but dont feel as though it should end yet, if youre up for it. thanks. bai for now.
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Reviewed By: LexiPlexi On: February 14, 2010 15:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this fanfiction. You have a fantastic talent for expressing the characters' feelings and thoughts without be overly dramatic- just appropriately and believably so. Which is hard to come by in fanficiton writing! lol The concept is great, and I loved reading the chapters with the meeting of the two lovers. Needless to say, I wholly enjoy your story and I can't wait for more :)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY hope kagomes cancer leaves...
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