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| "Their Daughter's Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Janey K On: August 17, 2011 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't review often, but it made me sad to see that this story only had 2 reviews, and both chock full of shitty grammar. But on to the actual review: you have a good story here. It's not uncommon to find a storyline like this, but your characters have enough personality to keep it interesting. There are small things I don't like though...sometimes, it feels like Shirou is too alike to Inuyasha. Also, why did it take 7 years for Kagome to defend her daughter? And the time skip...it's rather abrupt, and although I kind of get a rough sketch of what happened after Sesono was taken, I think the story would be much better rounded if there was at least some small explanation of the events that happened right after. All in all, though, an excellent story so far. I look forward to your update. | Title: love it
Reviewed By: kagome2353 On: January 15, 2010 10:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey its me a gaing..... love it, it's a little sad but stall love it
| Title: love it
Reviewed By: kagome2353 On: January 10, 2010 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story cant wat to read more of it.....
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