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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2012 15:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was awesome and I feel like I have been waiting forever for it. Some of it though I think I have read before but I loved the end I understand How poor sweet little Inuyasha fees though sometimes things just get to hard and overwhelming and you just want to end it and make the pain and sorrow go away. It's those who stick around that are truly the strongest despite the problems and pain and Inuyasha is one of the absolute strongest now it's just up to Kouga and even Sesshoumaru to show that to him and make him want to stick around. This story is awesome thank you so much for writing it please if you could though update just a bit sooner. As far as the mid to low scores that's cause you missed words and wrote the paragraphs to long kind of difficult to read that's all. Love it though thank you. |
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2011 20:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the June 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/winners/2011-2/september-2011/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=99&pa ge=1 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=99&pa ge=1 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association |
Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2011 00:26 EDT
Comment/Review:
It was good to see your voice again. I am glad that Inu is recovering somewhat and that he was able to help his brother...half brother! LOL! I have been enjoying this fic very much...this pairing isn't one I usually enjoy, but I LOVE what you've done with Kouga. Without changing his personality, you have matured him a bit, it is a wonderful change to me. On another item...do you plan on working on Protocal? It is a story that has had me chuckling on a regular bases. I would love to see an update? Please? |
Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2011 00:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. |
Reviewed By: Sola [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2011 07:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, poor Inuyasha! He can't die! |
Reviewed By: ajj7Sunhawk On: July 19, 2011 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that was amazing. Thoroughly enjoyed it. The characters I think were very much in character, and the way sickness twists will is really well protrayed. Kouga is real sweet and I think its needed and appropriate. Wolves are sweet, as long as they are not challenged - so I think tat its very much in character.Super chapter, thanks for writing so much. Hugs SunHawk |
Title: Super Duper woah
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2011 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fantastic and so suspenseful especially in the operating room. I can not wait to find out what happens next. I also hope above all else that Kouga does not leave Inuyasha alone with anyone especially any medical personnel to many have done to many things to that poor darling. Makes me want to perform surgery on all his tormentors which would serve them right since I wouldn't know what I was doing. Keep up this great story I am loving it and you are doing an awesome job. |
Title: Woot great ride
Reviewed By: ajj7SunHawk On: April 26, 2011 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Demon CSI Each Demmon comes equiped to : Do the science - "What's the goo on the table?" "We were just encouraging informat to speak." THEN Turn the suspects INTO science experiments. Muhahahah LOVE IT! Sesshy-Kouga Banter was sooo much fun, I love the quips between the two as they head to battle. Hell yeah "princess' saved self! Stupid Sesshy they had guns could should have given closer support - I agree with Kouga - YOUR FAULT!!! Hey do people really say "What the fuck ever"? lol such a cute swear Lol I LIKE THAT DOCTOR! well assuming he is not doing something dangerous to thepuppy with the milky substance that is. But the Dr seems really battle competant very nice.. err did ypu mention what kind of Youkai he is? WOlf? I hope Kouga and Sesshy get a chance to see that Inuyasha had not gone bezerk and was in control when he went Demon, I have a feeling that its importyant for Sesshy's respect for Inuyahsa to see that. Man wonderful chapter *smirk to match Inu's. Hugs!! Go write the next one :3 thanks so much!! |
Title: wondering
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2011 12:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome. Wondering who the girl with the knife in her chest is and who the baddy is but I love stories that always keep me wondering they add so much more bite to it. Poor sweet Inuyasha everyone is always underestimating him even those who should know better. I loved the protectiveness of Sesshomaru came a little late to him but at least now he knows that Inuyasha is someone he should care for and protect as any sibling should besides he was right Inuyasha is the only thing in his life who even cares about him in any way. I can see how he would miss the bloodlust but he only killed those who were in his way the only ones he went out of his way to kill were Naraku and Inuyasha as far as I remember from the anime and the manga. I can't wait to see how Kouga is going to find Inuyasha and who will find him first Sessh or Kouga another wondering wow I love this. Thank you so much for updating I agree with you about ajj she is a totally awesome writer and I love her stories to. |
Title: It's cool
Reviewed By: Sola [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2011 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All moves quickly! Inuyasha it's free! Sesshomaru it's enraged... Kouga in danger... It's cool! |
Title: PUPPY POWER!!!!
Reviewed By: ajj7sunhawk On: April 06, 2011 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Puppy is awake, in CONTROL and Loving in!!!! Go Inuyasha - this lot dont deserve anything but being killed... how dare they do that, after all Inuyasha did for them. Lol Kouga is smart and dense at the same time, I loved his faith in Inuyasha. I totally agree, the earth will weep when Inuyasha dies. CSI demon style - labs not requires. :) ANd WOW Sesshy is one scary demon, Hmm Inuyahsa is the only being that he protects... hmmm methinks tat Kouga is gonna face errr... competition. Oh and the statement about the Gods staying out of it had me in stiches. Everyone is on warpath - fun fun fun. Cant wait when the 3 top dogs are reunited. :D Thanks for writing snow, I know you have been sick and stuff. I really admire how you can write so well even with all that. Hugs !!! |
Title: Cheering Squad
Reviewed By: CraneCreator [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2011 17:09 EST
Comment/Review:
Huzzah!! When you dissappeared from AFF I was very much bummed but now I'm very glad to have found you. Oh and BTW thank you for sticking to your guns, far too often I see authors chased off entirely by uninspired people. "Those that discourage your dreams have likely abandoned their own." So know that you have a helluva lot more people rooting for you then against you. On that final note love the story as well. |
Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2011 21:08 EST
Comment/Review:
So a new nefarious character emerges! Luckily it is in everyone's best interest that Inu survives, but I hope the combination of Sess getting to the bottom of who scarred Inu & Kouga rescuing Inu will combine to start to unravel the mystery. |
Title: Save him Save him now please
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 16:41 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the update alot although although why do you need ajj- approval? Anyway it's really very interesting and I want to kill the Doctor who is hurting sweet little Inuyasha how dare he and Kouga and Sessh better go save him immediately or they should have their butts kicked by said Hanyou poor baby and then Kouga better mate Inuyasha no matter what he says or does to make him better the little brat doesn't know whats good for him sometimes he's just to innocent. Also one last thing it you can get a life-sized, anatomically correct Sesshoumaru android to use and abuse at will can I get one of Inuyasha purty please and where can I get him? |
Title: Snow Rocks
Reviewed By: ajj7sunhawk On: January 30, 2011 05:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow great fic, only reason youo dont get a ten fior style of writing is cause I am STILL sore about the TWO chiffies in a chapter. I mean how evil can you get. Seriously Great piece of work. Bit sad all we see is Inu slppeing, but I loved the sesshy making the mole squirm. I mean how dumb can you get lying to Sesshy. Grr on the stupid bad guy and femlae, please allow Inu vengence. Looking forward to Kouga's retribution, he is not going to be a happy wolfie when he gets back. Keep up the excellent work. I LOVE this fic so much. Hmm cant help but wonder if the badie is a morphed Jaken... just wondering. Lol Thanks for the great read |
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