Reviewed By: Serenity666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2010 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad, some grammar and spelling problems, and a few of your thoughts get mixed up - I love writing so it's kinda normal for me to notice it. Otherwise, I'm pretty engrossed in your story! :) Keep it up, and just have fun with it
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