| "Ma Baby's daddy" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Title: schapman573
Reviewed By: schapman573 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2013 09:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really unique and dark story, please continue this fic soon. |
Title: MORE
Reviewed By: MOREE On: September 03, 2012 05:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE DONT GIVE UP ON THIS STORY I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. |
Reviewed By: Bumma On: May 18, 2012 03:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter I love how things are coming along now untell the major blow up. I think Pan needs to stop being a brat and realize chi chi is only trying to help her. Cant wait for the next. |
Reviewed By: Doco On: May 10, 2012 03:01 EDT
Comment/Review:
I didnt expect another chapter so fast, but I truelly like that. It feels good Trunks is feeling guilty for what he did to poor Pan. |
Reviewed By: Doco On: May 08, 2012 01:30 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Trunks should get his ass beat hes an hypocrite. I dont see the reason why pan left and will everyone find out who the father of her baby is? Sorry to hear that about your cat hope you're doing better. |
Reviewed By: cree On: May 05, 2012 22:54 EDT
Comment/Review:
This was a great read, it really bothers me that Trunks was so mad at Goten for breaking the code after what he did to Pan and that was worse he Use, Beat, and got her pregnant. Goten treated Bra good and he loves her. I know it will be worse when Trunks is found out. |
Reviewed By: fameworld [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2012 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I'm happy you're going to continue you this because I cant wait to se how it ends, not that I want it to get there cause I love reading it. I feel bad for Pan I hope everything works out good for her in the end. |
Reviewed By: Bumma On: April 13, 2012 21:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this story. I really would love to see what happends to Trunks and Marron relationship when she find out about his baby with Pan lol. I can't wait for the next chappy I will be waiting. |
Reviewed By: bumma On: March 25, 2012 00:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, how can Trunks and vegeta go after Goten, when trunks was with pan but he got her stuck on drug, he beat her, used her, and now shes pregnant with his child he should get his butt beat by goten now that hes getting stronger cause of what he did. |
Reviewed By: Bumma On: March 22, 2012 00:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry and put another chapter I really love this story and I would love to see what happend next. |
Reviewed By: JazZy Luv On: February 05, 2012 18:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really thought you abandon this story. Im so glad I was wrong I loved this chapter. Trunks has so many issues he seroiusly needs to work out. I feel for Pan she is so lost like many teenagers are. I can't wait to see another chapter update soon. |
Reviewed By: fan kid On: January 22, 2012 13:45 EST
Comment/Review:
I love it, I hope you update sooner. |
Reviewed By: kittykun On: October 29, 2011 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fan fic is really awesome! I just hope that the writer updates it soon, cuz I really wanna know what happens next! |
Reviewed By: JazZy Luv On: September 25, 2011 01:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far. I hope you update soon. There are some grammar mistakes. |
Reviewed By: fan kid On: September 21, 2011 00:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. whats Bra and Pans relationship are they friends? |
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