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"The World Between Awake And Asleep" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: 1087  On: May 16, 2010 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like the idea for this story! It's unique, totally unlike anything I've read so far. Your style of writing certainly needs improvement, but you've got the basics down pat. I hope you update soon! =D
 Reviewed By: Carie  On: March 21, 2010 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh, this is just amazing. The concept isn't exactly new, but the way you applied it to your story is inspiring. I love your characterizations too, and how everyone knows that what Hikaru says shouldn't logically be possible, but something deep in their hearts just kind of feels that it's right. So anyway, if you continue this, and I hope you do, then I will stalk you and give you cookies. Hee. ;D
 Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 19, 2010 10:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting concept. I know it's an odd series (Hikaru no Go I only read the manga) but it had this odd sense of depression surrounding it, that it was a tale retold countless times. Plus, oh so much yaoi written about it later on...Anyway, this story, if incomplete, is worth reading much more of. As you rewrite, or continue the story from where you left off, I'll continue to review. And hey, it's a reason to review the original series to boot, hehehe. Continue to update, ja ne.

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