| "Don't try it a Second Time" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: don't try it a second time
Reviewed By: kagoe15higurashi On: July 19, 2012 08:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know you should do a scene with kagome and inuyasha and sesshomaru you know a threesdome of have sessomaru descover them and he gets seriously pissed ^_^ |
Reviewed By: storyL0v3R On: August 08, 2010 19:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a few misspellings and grammar issues, but overall its really good :) You could continue with what you have, with the jealous person trying to take revenge against kagome. What happens at school when they all show up, does everyone of each gang approve? What about kouga, will he do something stupid? those are some ideas
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: kagome324421 On: May 11, 2010 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't what to ready more , what happiness next
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 17:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great chapters! I like how the bouncer was so funny! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: lovemonkeyz310 On: April 11, 2010 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story and cant wait to read more
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 18:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good update!
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI I love your story your very talented. I love the sessshomaru kagome pairing. This story is funny interesting and it you could actually picture it happening in your mind. It's great the way you have them in school and the interaction between them. I especially love'd it when sessh/kag were making out in the hallway >>>THANK YOU SO MUCH
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 18:25 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good updates! Do it again soon, PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Lovepavi On: March 05, 2010 14:48 EST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic so far please keep it going thanks
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2010 20:16 EST
Comment/Review:
Well, she wasn't subtle at all, was she? Good story, I like it.
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