| "Bankotsu's Sensual Lessons" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Honest Loyal Reader On: June 26, 2010 04:17 CDT
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Hi there I think (and so do others) that you are a very great writer! The only problem is in your summary it says that he would be giving lessons to the girls in Inuyasha. It started out as such but now he's focused on one girl and it bacame a story about him and a made up girl no one knows about. So I would make a new story for that or easier change the summary because it's misleading....thanks for you take no offense to this what so ever....
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Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 11:19 CDT
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Bakotsu's so violent lol! thanx for updating!!!!
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Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: Tashwampa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2010 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg I love your fics so much!!! When I read your work for the first time, I instantly fell in love with your style!!! I would love it if you were to keep writing!!! I mean, wow!! You are very talented at writing lemons!! Because of you Bankotsu is my favorite bad guy!! You are the creator of a new breakthrough style of writing!!! I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story (random bunch of oneshots) please update soon. You write really good lemons
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