|"Faithful" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ]|
| Reviewed By: amet On: December 24, 2014 15:08 EST|
Youji can be faithful, if only those fangirls knew ;) we all need
some break from angst sometimes. Really sweet ficlet, short but it
said it all.
| Reviewed By: ObsidianButterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2010 21:16 EDT|
Who needs yaoi when you write such lovely shounen-ai? This was very nice... great POV too.
| Reviewed By: zetsuai2005 On: May 06, 2010 00:06 EDT|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
This was short, sweet, and poignant. I loved the characterization of Yohji, and blew out a breath when Aya smiled. This story touched and thrilled me, in a quiet, secret way. Well done!
| Reviewed By: Cierzo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2010 16:44 EST|
I liked the external POV very much ^^. The declaration of faithfulness is all the more sweet for coming from Yohji, I think.
| Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2010 21:40 EST|
This is sooo sweet! Getting Yohji to settle down and declare true faithfulness, I can understand why his fangirls mourn his playboy ways. this was very cute. thanks for brightening my day! ^_^