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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy On: January 13, 2011 16:30 EST
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well I'm sure he knows WHAT to do with it, the question is will Aya LET him do something with it without horrible maiming and torture and disfiguration involved? |
Reviewed By: ObsidianButterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2010 22:52 EDT
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Hahahahahahahaha!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sue On: July 26, 2010 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I definitely support Yohji getting his hands down Aya's pants and Aya realizing he enjoys it. :) This was a very enjoyable story. I loved how insatiable Yohji is, whether it be sex or curiosity!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy On: April 23, 2010 21:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
XD Oh gods I think I'm gonna die laughing! XD And Yes I definitely support Yohji getting his hands down Aya's pants! Poor Aya, we abuse him so, although I would love it if you would draw a picture of Aya wearing the disguise, it definitely sounds drool worthy!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: April 22, 2010 01:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
I liked how he started in on Manx at the end.
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