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 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas the lazy  On: January 13, 2011 16:30 EST
Comment/Review:
well I'm sure he knows WHAT to do with it, the question is will Aya LET him do something with it without horrible maiming and torture and disfiguration involved?
 Reviewed By: ObsidianButterfly [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2010 22:52 EDT
Comment/Review:
Hahahahahahahaha!!!!
 Reviewed By: Sue  On: July 26, 2010 13:54 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh I definitely support Yohji getting his hands down Aya's pants and Aya realizing he enjoys it. :) This was a very enjoyable story. I loved how insatiable Yohji is, whether it be sex or curiosity!
 Reviewed By: Cody Thomas being lazy  On: April 23, 2010 21:28 EDT
Comment/Review:
XD Oh gods I think I'm gonna die laughing! XD And Yes I definitely support Yohji getting his hands down Aya's pants! Poor Aya, we abuse him so, although I would love it if you would draw a picture of Aya wearing the disguise, it definitely sounds drool worthy!
 Reviewed By: glinwulf  On: April 22, 2010 01:10 EDT
Comment/Review:
I liked how he started in on Manx at the end.

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