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| "What Really Happened During The Three Year Gap" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Why in Kami's name didn't you tell me you wrote something? *bottom lip quivers* You, you, big meany. :P
Vegeta: Such tough words, Onna. *rolls eyes*
ssjprincess: Ewwww! That's not a good habit to get into, Vegeta. *slips on a pair on rubber gloves and retrieves Vegeta's eyes then hands them back to him* Geez, Vegeta. You could get an infection or something.
Vegeta: O_o;;; *chirp* *chirp* o_O;;
ssjprincess: *taking off gloves and letting them return to the place they came from (don't ask me where.... It's *waves hands around mystically* Magic!) Anywho, where was I?
Vegeta: Going insane?
ssjprincess: *chuckles* No silly. I've been there though, the scenery is wonderful! Remind me to show you the pictures sometime.
Vegeta: *narrows eyes* Onna, are you annoying me on purpose?
ssjprincess: *smiles* Of course. You're so cute when you get mad and that little vein sticks out of your forehead.
Vegeta: *sighs hoplessly* Onna, get on with the review would you. I've got training to do.
ssjprincess: Oh, yes! The review! I enjoy this take on those infamous 'Three Years'. Good job on it. I though, don't like this theory. For one thing, I think with Bulma's attitude she would be the one to have had enough of Yamcha, and end it with him. Can you image the butt-chewing Bulma would give! If anyone would be crying, it would definitely be Yamcha.
Vegeta: The weakling.
ssjprincess: *shakes her head and chuckles* And that coming from the same person,that in this story, had a voice 'cracking with emotion'.
Vegeta: O_O! What?! *reads* O_O! *looks at you* How? How could you write that?! *pouts* And I thought you liked me. *crosses arms and pouts some more*
ssjprincess: Awwww.... doesn't it just break your heart? *rolls her eyes* Anyway.... Do you want to hear my theory on the 'Three Years'?
Vegeta: No.
ssjprincess: I have two.
Vwegeta: And I said no.
ssjprincess: The first one..
Vegeta: *sighs and leans against the wall* Might as well get comfortable. Note to self: Self, find a way to shut up the Onna. *smirks then chuckles* Self, now is not the time... for that.
ssjprincess: *blushes* Anyway! The first theory.... I agree with what Mirai Trunks said, I think it was a 'passion thing'. I think they had there 'moments' together, but Vegeta; even if he did feel something about Bulma; would not alllow himself the weakness of caring; let alone admitting love; for anyone. I think his feeling changed during the battle with Cell.
Vegeta: Are you done now?
ssjprincess: No, I still have my second theory.
Vegeta: Oh..... yay. *sighs*
ssjprincess: Now for my second theory.. I think Vegeta was in the Briefs' lab, and he created a potion which made whoever drank it fall head over hills in love with him. And then he gave it to Bulma.
Vegeta: O_o; Have you been in the lab again, Onna?
ssjprincess: No. Okay, how about this... aliens abducted Bulma to analyze her genius brain. Then during one of their experiments they crossed a few brain waves wrong.... hence her attraction to you.
Vegeta: O_o Are you done now?
ssjprincess: *sighs* Yes, I was searching for a reason she would be attracted to you.
Vegeta: *smirks* Don't forget, Onna. You are attracted to me.
ssjprincess: Shhh... everyone has their problems and bad habits.
Vegeta: What!?
ssjprincess: *chuckles* Oh man! Look at the length of this review! And to think, there are more chapters to read.
Vegeta: Oh Kami! I might as well give up on training today.
ssjprincess: Again, I loved how you wrote this scenerio. Good job! On to Chapter 2! | Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 08:36 CDT
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Thankies for using my suggestion...alhtough i really liked that third scenario, it was sadistically, stupidly, hilarious. I got a kick out of it, especially considering that I've written one of those, main characters...you fill in the blanks for the characters...have sex not even an hour after meeting eachother and fighting wiht eachother no less. I guess it's easier for people to use the old, played out plots than it is for them to come up with a new one of their own. Great job and I'm glad you wrote this. | Reviewed By: megan On: August 28, 2002 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice pace. moves fast. very fun. | Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2002 15:32 CDT
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My honest take on the whole what really happened thing is that they both needed someone to talk to and one thing led to another...or maybe yamucha just wasn't cutting it and Bulma decided Vegeta would be a better man. (all puns intended) | Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2002 21:11 CDT
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I always thought that the reason Vegeta and Bulma got together was
because of that gravity machine eventually got to Vegeta's head. He was off it when he got with Bulma.
And Bulma, well she wanted to get back at Yamcha so she gave in.
I don't know, but that just seems like the only correct theory to me. | Reviewed By: ME On: August 01, 2002 09:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I like the idea of what you're doing. You should go with it. It's a very interesting & important subject to write about. You should finish it soon. | Reviewed By: Goat On: August 01, 2002 22:11 CDT
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I always thought this theory was awful. How does she breakup with Yamcha then about fifteen seconds later end up fucking Vegeta? I want to see what your theory is. |
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