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| "Necrofiend: Blood Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2013 15:59 EST
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Long time no see. :) I must admit I was thinking about the original story, and came investigating, thinking it still might have been up (or resubmitted), but alas, no such luck. So I've spent the last hour reacquainting myself with this version. I still love it. Just wanted to drop by and say that. :) Hope everything is well. | Reviewed By: Hikaru Itsuko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2010 00:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey I love this story, it's really interesting and intriguing, I hope you can update soon, I'm dying to read more, and know about this prophecy that the old lady was talking about, 'til next chapter
| Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 02:03 EDT
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When you say some minor characters won't be appearing, I hope you didn't mean mr! I'D BETTER BE IN THIS SOMEHOW. I can give you my updated appearance if you'd like... or not. I don't know. I miss talking to you and I want an update on your real life Missy! new email is roisinalainn@myspace.com.... or you could just talk to me on fb or myspace. my fb is Elizabeth Fly, and you already have my myspace. I expect mail miss!
| Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2010 11:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I went back and read all the chapters. ) Instead of speed reading this time. And I have to say it's even better when you read every word! The rating doesn't go any higher than 10 :-( So 10 is what your going to have to accept. Hehe. Now, this reader wants more! Off to a great start, now I'm checking my mail every day! More more more!
| Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2010 22:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to see you writing again! It is a totally different story, and I have to get used to the name changes, but I will deal with it. I read thru all the chapters pretty fast will have to go back and reread! I usually do anyway!
| Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2010 19:50 EDT
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So this chapter started to fell like a filler, but then a bad guy has to come along ^-^. I was wondering what you would do to those peach pastel carpets this time around. This was definitely more realistic than the original version. Good job on subtly mentioning Adriano, to me at least, it felt like waving a steak in front of a pit bull. I know its coming, and I'm anxiously waiting, and I know it is going to be soooooo goooodddddd. ^-^ lol. Anyway, There were a few typos, like when Thiago is talking about his leg, you wrote 'led' or when he is cursing himself for forgetting his gun you switched tenses and used 'his' instead of 'mine'. Other than that, I didn't catch anything. Thank you for writing ^-^ p.s. I wonder when Raven is going to lose (if ever) this human attachment.
| Title: Review Time. ^-^
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2010 23:25 EDT
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Okay, so, I felt like this was a filler chapter, necessary of course, but not all that attention grabbing. It did however do what I think you were aiming for, correct me if I'm wrong, that is solidifying Tiaz's callousness and efficiency as a killer, and not a whiny bitch. So if I'm right, kudos, you effectively achieved that. If I'm wrong, well, then I'm dumb. Anyway, I shall continue to review, I find myself checking my e-mail multiple times a day in anticipation of the next installment, I just figured you would rather have a multitude of reviews from others beside me.... Anyway, so back to the chapter. It was a filler, my short attention span was suffered thoroughly due to this and watching Juno (I don't suggest multitasking on literally four different things when you are trying to retain it all in memory..). So this is a long review and I will end it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and Thank you for writing. ^-^
| Title: I should stop....
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 20:01 EDT
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reviewing, you must be getting tired of hearing from me. Anyhow, I liked this chapter, it put more of a nitty gritty realistic side of Tiaz being a killer. In the original, he came off as nearly not bad-ass enough yet he still instilled 'fear' in his enemies. I like this newer aspect to him. Good job, and thank you for writing. ^-^
| Title: Adriano ^-^
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2010 22:38 EDT
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My, my... I must say I liked the first confrontation between the two...I am looking forward to further conversations between the two. One thing as to the writing. The section where the pictures come into play, it goes from the pictures of the kids, right to the elephant, but doesn't explain that the elephant is a picture as well, or isn't it? I'm not too clear on that, perhaps I just read it wrong and I intend to go back to make sure I didn't, but it just starts explaining the elephant, not telling what it is or why it is of importance. If I'm mistaken, I apologize, other wise everything was fine. ^-^ Thank you for writing.
| Reviewed By: dcopperfox On: June 02, 2010 13:43 EDT
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So I hate to ask this and I'm sure you can erase this comment but this sounds a lot like the anita blake series let me know if im totally off. I was just curious how many similarities there were.
| Title: This is Sistine
Reviewed By: Thao_Lorakin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2010 17:46 EDT
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Hi again. ^-^ So far so good. I must say, I am guilty of reading the original story line at least 3 dozen times, so I pretty much have it all memorized, but these last few chapters were good. I'm anxious to meet the equivalent to Kano, and I'm glade you like the name... eventually, one of my children will be named that... Andi must say that I love the new introduction of Andriano into the story, although letting Tiaz get a good eye full of him was quite entertaining, I'm sure this work out just as well. Keep writing, you are doing well. ^-^
| Reviewed By: Sistine_the_angel_Of_Hell On: May 30, 2010 13:24 EDT
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Okay, so i was/am a big fan of what the stories use to be so i have my fingers crossed that changing them around will not disappoint. However, losing Kano will be hard to fix, he was my favorite character >.< and Nao.... him too... anyway.... names names, what's in a name.... -Everett -Ezra -Ezekiel (Zeek) -Ryne -Elihe I can't think of any more... as you can tell, I like names that begin with 'E'.. lol.. Anyway, looking forward with wary hopes to further chapters. Thank you for writing
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