| "Treason of the Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: KAI103842 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2011 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I don't know about everyone else but I really like this story! PLease please please keep on writing! Takes alot to write ou a plot and then put it all together! I noticed you haven't written since last year, please write another chapter soon!! |
Reviewed By: _D_ On: July 16, 2010 10:18 EDT
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Chapter 5 made me gag a bit from all the feelings that were flowing through InuYasha's brain. Also, the chapter lost my attention after the whole scary doll thing. Sorry, but I didn't feel interested in reading chapter six 'cos most of it was just a song. This story is a big disappointment to me overall. It's like a bunch of things put together and it doesn't really attract my attention as much as the summary did. I'm sorry for being harsh, but it's true from my point of view. Take it or leave it.
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 04:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I forgot to give an overall rating, so you get another review! :D Oh and the mystery character has got to be... either Shippo... Or perhaps Ayame?..
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Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2010 04:28 EDT
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Story is great so far! Can't wait for Inu & Kagome to meet though... And I'm hungry for longer chapters! I just can't get enough :) Update Soon Please!
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: kagome324421 On: June 09, 2010 18:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story.... can't wait to ready more.
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Reviewed By: JaJeMalory On: June 08, 2010 16:27 EDT
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Ayame? Hmmm... Nice chapter again. Update soon. I'm still wondering about the dreamcatcher though...
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Reviewed By: JaJeMalory On: June 08, 2010 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hmmm, nicely written. I like your writing style: short and very to the point. You don't give much details but just enough to keep the story going. The scene with the pancakes was funny(I'm just weird and laugh at everything silly, don't mind me ^.^;) I was disappointed by the fact that InuYasha wasn't the therapist. But I think it'll be much better this way too. Are you finally going to link up this story with the story from the anime/manga? I would like to hear more about the dream catcher thing. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 22:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this story is so good I love it!.it has an excellent plot and is interesting! keep up the good work...LOL THANK YOU
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Reviewed By: JaJemalory97 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2010 17:07 EDT
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this is interesting concept, one never heard of before. Please do continue.
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