Reviewed By: Serenity666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2010 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are a some misspellings and a few grammar cases, where spaces need to be inserted and such. otherwise, please just update the story :)
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