| "Time Warp *Revised*" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Love the story:D
Reviewed By: Irish Rebel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2011 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story can't wait for the nxt chapter:D Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Keep up the good work!!! xx |
Reviewed By: KittyKatKattyKitt On: January 31, 2011 16:17 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story!!!!! Please please please update! Great job! |
Title: Oooppps
Reviewed By: Mousers18 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2010 15:04 EST
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I deleted the first chapter on accident! I dont know how to get it back, but i do know its on a file on one of my other computers and it wont get here until.. june/july... Should i rewrite it? I really don't want to... it took forever... and ever.... :P Welll... did anyone happen to like... copy it and save it to their own computers? God i wish you did! :P Oh well... its all my fault :P Im going to have to start rewriting it... Wish me luck :) |
Reviewed By: Elfgurl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2010 15:31 EST
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I knew that guy was suspicious! I hope that Kurama/Youko finds Kagome before it's too late!!! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Mousers18 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2010 15:19 EST
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oh... yeah.. i did... :P Thanks for bringing that to my attention. :) I'll fix that, and ill try not to jump around as much in the future. As far as how the story goes... I planned for him to be dead and in Reikai. Thank you :) |
Reviewed By: KEdakumi On: November 30, 2010 12:44 EST
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I am enjoying your story. It has a nice twist. :) Just watch jumping to different POV's too often. A quick question I'm kinda confused about, Koenma said Aki Higurashi fell off the radar then a moment later said he died and they had his soul there. Which way is it supposed to be? Thanks for a nice story! |
Reviewed By: Mousers18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2010 19:42 EDT
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Thanks for the comment :) I hope the explanation isnt to confusing, i have most of the story planned, i just have to write in a.. less complex and insane way? haha Ill post soon :)
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2010 00:31 EDT
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Hmmm the story seems a little scattered but I still like it ....the plot is lovely.... I wonder what Kagome's father will have to say? to explain? I'm sure it will be crazy what ever it is...hehe .....nyuka
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Reviewed By: mamiluckey On: July 30, 2010 23:48 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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i am a HUGE fan of both series!!! thank you soo much for bringing the two together... please continue the work... i am very intrested on how this will end...
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Reviewed By: Mousers18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2010 13:27 EDT
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Hahaha! My bad. Thanks
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2010 23:04 EDT
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Umm, forehead not four-head when K/K were smooching on the steps.
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Reviewed By: Mousers18 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 19:20 EDT
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Thank you for your response, I'll take that into consideration for further chapters :)
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 17:23 EDT
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Well it's rather hard to read all run together like that, at least the sections are spaced though. If it's a MMO glitch you can probably fix it, if not you really need to learn how to properly space things so they're easy to read, try looking at some other peoples fics, like maybe SplendentGoddess, I think she spaces things correctly.
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