Title: Fun!
Reviewed By: Lady Shockbox [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2010 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ooooooh… I'm definitely going to keep my eye on this ficclet. I loved the first drabble as is. I fell in love with Cj's character right off the bat, too. So cute, methinks. :3 Requests? Hmmm... I think I have a fun one. :D Archtech is my Doga Bomber OC who ends up settling on Neotopia at this facility called the ASC, Axis Survivor Colony, that was set up after the battle with General Zeong. There were so many remaining soldiers after the Dark Axis disbanded, they simply had nowhere else to go, and they couldn't go back to their homeland of Axis because of how ravaged it had become. The majority of Neotopians shunned them when they tried to find a home there, but a group of individuals called the RRC, Robot Rights Campaign, offered to help. One massive lawsuit against the SDG later, which included accusations of mistreatment of prisoners of war - as indicated by Zapper Zaku's forceful reprogramming - the Dark Axis won in the case of Axis v. Guard. The SDG was ordered to pay eighty-eight million dollars in damages, and the money went to constructing the Axis Survivor Colony. Unfortunately, the SDG appealed and the new judge in that case overturned the decision. By that point, the Dark Axis only had eight million dollars at its disposal, and the ASC became nothing more than a shantytown (think District 9 style shantytown, if you've seen the movie). Archtech was one of the many Doga Bombers who settled there. Ironically enough, he met a Neotopian femmebot named Alice after he saved her from being chased down by a few human hooligans. Romance ensued, despite the fact that they were from two completely different worlds and the fact that Alice's human owners refused to let her see Arch. I dunno. Just a thought. :P Regardless as to whether or not you do it, I'll be keeping tabs on this story. Your writing style is fun, and I'd love to see what else you put up. Drabbles are fun. XP
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