| "Which is my love?" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sharon MacKinnon On: November 17, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should make the other chapters and hurry because I'm dieng from the suspense! Anyway when you do your next chapters, can you please torture Y.Bakura because he' my least favorite character in Yu-Gi-Oh!. Y.Bakura:Hey! Me:What? It's the truth! Besides when I make my Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfic I can torture you and Kero more by tying you up and gagging you and make you stare at sweets!^^ Yami:What about me? Me:Don't worry! I'll make sure that you will get a part! Yugi:What about me? Are you going to kill me!? Me:No way! You are my #1 character!*runs over and hugs Yugi* Yugi:*blushes*^^ Yami:I'm going to blackmail Y.Bakura because he likes you! Y.Bakura:Untrue and unfair you beep Yami! Me:Don't cuss you baka! Y.Bakura:Yes Misstress... Me,Yami,Kero,Sakura and Yugi:Shut up you beep beep of a baka tombrobber! Me:Oops! I didn't know Yugi new that cuss word! Right on Yugi and Sakura!*gives them both a high five and gives Yugi a another hug* Yugi:*blushes even more!*^^ Yami:Aww Yugi you look so cute when you... Me:Say that again and you die! Yami:I challenge you to a Tie Kwan Do match! Kero:And suffer another beating from a girl? Me:I thought that was funny!^^ Anyway, this was me talking!^^ I just love this fanfiction!
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Reviewed By: Yami's_girl On: October 12, 2003 01:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
THAT WAS THE COOLEST FANFIC EVER!!!!!!!!! *Gets on knees * PLEASE WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Minta On: March 13, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such and awesome story!!! You should write more chapters soon!! And maybe you can add Mokuba, Seto, and Pegasus into the story!! Just write more chapters! PPPPPPlllllllEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: little petite angel On: January 14, 2003 04:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok first of all who do i love part 2 sux and not
because sakura pick yugi because that was soooooo
ovious but it was because of the way syaoran and
sakura became best friends see i hate this kid of thing
everyone put this on there stories everyone
if its angst oh a period of depression and then best friends
if its a happy one breack up then best friends for the love
of god no one and i mean no one deal with a break up that well
( fyi : for those of you who say you do your a bunch of liars ! )
thats why i gave the originality of your story a 2
because that chapter was predictable from the get go
and everyone knew she was going to pick yami/yugi
trie to make it a little more mysterios next time
and if i can borrow archangemons line
WHICH IS MY LOVE PART # 2 IS A CLONE OF ALL
OTHER FAN FICS A CLONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: November 13, 2002 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd give you elevens if I could. Update soon please! |
Reviewed By: DarkAngelz On: August 18, 2002 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished reading all of the chapters so far. It's very kewl. Though the only thing I'm not big on is Yu-gi and Sakrua. Their Cute together but not like Li and Sakrua are.. They're so cute together.
So keep up the good work. Oh yah what happened to the other cards? If only 16 and their is 32 all together plus the one she made in the movie.. and now were down to 13.. okay waaaay over my head.. *does a little dance* I sooo need to go to sleep. Oh yah one more thing. MORE!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cherry Star On: August 12, 2002 16:48 CDT
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This chapter was very funny . I like the part when Sakura chases Joey with her sword . |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cherry Star On: August 12, 2002 13:29 CDT
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Yay go Sakura . She was so right in this chapter about Syaoran . Add the next chapter soon I can't wait to find out what Sakura is going to say to Yugi . |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 12:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter. Well poor sayoran (sniff sniff). write the next chapter soon. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cherry Star On: August 11, 2002 10:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
This chapter was great. Also it was surprising that Syaoran also came as an exchange student .
It was funny too. Please continue . |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay Sayoran. Well keep up with the chaps. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cherry Star On: August 06, 2002 11:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
This chapter was awesome . I really like it .
Please write more . |
Reviewed By: Sailor Mau [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2002 20:55 CDT
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Yay I won. Yea, Yes, Yahoo! don't mind me. well great chapter and hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Sailor Cherry Star On: August 05, 2002 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for telling me about your fanfic in your review at fanfiction.net . I finally found it and it's very good . I love it ! PLEASE CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: Kay On: August 04, 2002 22:57 CDT
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You are soo going to win(u can control what he does anyhow). Anyhow I love ur fic so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE wit a cherry on top WRITE more! |
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