| "A Beautiful Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2010 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's okay...you know, I think I kind of agree with you. I mean at first I was totally looking forward to another chapter, but then you would need to write another one and another one and I agree that this story should stay short and sweet. I think the way you decided to end it, Inuyasha's statement to Sesshoumaru and his decision to ride with Kagome to the doctor...I think that does pretty much sum it up right there. Good job! Now get back to work on your other stuff! LOL
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Reviewed By: Ivygirl11 On: September 16, 2010 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry everything was ment to be tens, love this story!!!!
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Title: Please
Reviewed By: Ivygirl11 On: September 16, 2010 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE Update so so so good want more!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 12:27 CDT
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AHHHH!!! Oh my god pleeease update soon i cant wait to figure out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2010 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew! Sooooo glad she told Inuyasha, and I loved his reaction. And Sesshoumaru's! LOL. Looking forward to the next update!
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Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX AKA MYCHELLE 79 On: August 31, 2010 16:46 CDT
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u know thats what my mom said when i told her she seemed really suportive my dad 2 they cant wait in till i have my little one my due date is feb. 17. i'm like 3 in a half pregnat. u know there is alot 2 think about when it comes 2 this like abortion,adoption(whether or not if it stays in the family or not),and just plain keeping it. desitions destions!! but i must tell u MORNIG SICKNESS IS A BITCH ESPECILLY IF ITS SEVERE ENOUGH THAT U CANT HOLD DOWN FOOD WETHER OR NOT IF U EAT OR NOT U JUST KEEP THROWING UP TRUST ME!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: August 30, 2010 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like you story I hope will write a little pit more about her raising the child.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2010 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Goodie goodie, glad to hear you plan on making this a mini multi-chapter. Chapter two was great, and I'm really looking forward to the next updates. :-)
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Reviewed By: WatersEdge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2010 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with Splendent Goddess, is there any chance at seeing a multi-chaptered fiction come from this short?
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2010 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...okay, I have no idea why that first reviewer is digitally screaming her lungs out, but I think she liked it, LOL, and so do I... so...this isn't the end of it, right? This doesn't sound to me like the type of story that should go on forever and ever and ever, but I would love at least a second chapter, with her telling her mother, and Inuyasha. Come on, don't leave us in that land of 'never knowing'. *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX AKA MYCHELLE 79 On: August 23, 2010 00:12 CDT
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I KNOW HOW KAGOME FELT I WENT THREW IT MYSELF ALTHOUGH I'M OLDER THAN 15(I MAY LOOK 15 BUT IVE ALREADY REACH MY 21ST BIRTHDAY)BUT I'M NOT MARRIED LIVING W/BY BOYFRIEND AND I'M NOW PREGNAT SAD PART IS I DIDNT KNOW HOW 2 TELL MY PARENTS I FELT LIKE I WAS 15 AND NOW THAT THEY KNOW THEY HAVE BEEN SUPORTIVE. ITS FUNNY B/C I GOT A COUSIN WHO IS NOW PREGNAT AS WELL FARTHER ALONG THAN ME BUT STIIL AND I DID WORK WITH 2 OTHER PREGNAT WOMEN 1 HAD THE BABY OTHER IS FARTHER ALONG THAN ME AND I'M STILL WORKING WITH HER OTHER IS ON MATERITY LEAVE. WELL PREGNANACY CAN B SCARY ESPECALLY WHEN U DONT KNOW HOW 2 TELL UR PARENTS!!
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