| "I Feel So..." Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: caramelheart [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two words: Great Story!! This was an original way to get Bulma and Vegeta together! As for Yamcha... let Vegeta kill his or somethin. Anyway, two thumbs up!
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Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shastania:*sniffle* That was one of the best ficcys i've ever read!
Pyscho Kitty: I agree! As Shastania's pyschotic muse, i must say that you've given me insperation!
Shastania: OH NO!! *runs*
Pyscho Kitty: O_o ' She always does that.... *sigh* Well, anyways.. this story kicked ass! Get a sequel up soon! |
Reviewed By: Shastania On: January 22, 2003 05:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shasty: Stupid Yamcha! *shoots Yamcha with a rubber chicken launcher*
Yamcha: *dies* X_X
Shasty: Mwahahahahahaha!!! *hack* *cough*
cool chappie! Yamcha is such a bakajaro! Weelll...on to the next chapter!
*prances off to the next chapter, leaving Yamcha's dead body to be peaked at by vultures* |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shastania:Wow! It's been so bloody long since i've read a good lemon! Me likie very mucho!!!!
Mirai Trunks: *sweatdrop* Uh oh.... this spells trouble.
Shastania: Hey, you! Get back in the broom closet!
Mirai Trunks: Yes, MA'AM!! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shastania: Wheee! I heart this fic so mucho! ^-^
Vegeta: *smirk* You only like it cuz i'm in it, baka onna!
Shastania: *smacks Veggie* Dun call me onna! You can call me baby or honey, but NOT onna!
Vegeta: *smirks* Who loves ya, baby?
Shastania: *grins and glomps Vegeta* You're so damn sexiful!
Vegeta: aaak! Get off it, woman! *points to somewhere in the background* Hey, is that Mirai Trunks?
Shastania: OOooooooooooooh, where?!?
Vegeta: *back hands her*
***5 hours later****
Shastania: *wakes up in a ditch* Grrrr..that bastard... *perks up* Me likie this fic very mucho! *adds to favorites* :D |
Reviewed By: Pandora666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 14:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very comical i love it the idea of the punishment chamber is great. i love it. |
Reviewed By: Foxie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Plz go on. yur story is great. i think its kind of funny how they got 2 gather. if u update soon let me no at. larry2991@earthlink.net |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 30, 2002 08:24 CST
Comment/Review:
hm, the lemon wasn't that good, too short. |
Reviewed By: Legana On: October 30, 2002 07:45 CST
Comment/Review:
the fight was good girl, they had nice arguments, escpecialy bulma at the last. |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 01, 2002 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story had so much humor, making me laugh many times which believe me is a feat in itself. I really enjoyed the positions you put Vegeta and Bulma in I mean the 'punishment room' that one of the best ideas I heard in a while. In a way a bit simple by the overview of everything, as you didn't go to deep through the story, emotion wise. Overall a amusing and enjoyable fic, but be warned that your spelling and grammar really needs to be upgraded with major accidents throughout the story you might say.
Oh well, I think you are a great writer and look forward to any other stories you have written.
Sorry for some of the flames but I give honest opinion and can be strict in reviews, but only for the reason to help you out.
Well, bye bye and keep writing. |
Reviewed By: cherry On: January 02, 2003 21:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!!! it was so sweet and romantic...i loved it. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, when I reviewed the last chap I was gonna request another, but decided that maybe I was being too greedy. Well, I'm glad you changed your mind cause this last chap was excellent. I like the fact that Veggie was ooc and teased Yamcha about his marriage to Bulma. Again, I hope you're proud of your story b/c you did a great job writing it and I had a blast reading it ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a nice ending, even though I'm sorry that it was the last chap. Looks like everyone took the news rather well, with the exception of Yamcha, of course. You did a super job with this story!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: August 21, 2002 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Bulma's pregnant. If Veggie thought he was up a creek before, wait till he hears the news ^_^. |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
To bad this had to end, this was great! :) |
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