| "My Immortal" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Reader in Disguise On: September 26, 2011 14:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I began reading, I knew it was going to be good, but dang!! This was such a beautiful piece! So touching and it moved every single string in my heart! You have always been such a gifted writer, but sometimes it still manages to amaze me at how truly wonderful you are! I loved every single word and it was such a wonderful piece, that I will have it among my all time favorites!! +-+-+ Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us!! *** May your inspiration continue to bless you for many, many years to come! |
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2011 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So beautiful and sad! As always, your updates have intrigued me enough that I just had to put off my schoolwork because I couldn't wait a minute more to read your story! |
Reviewed By: LittleMissMizuki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2011 17:02 EDT
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Wow… I’m… I’m speechless! It was wonderful! The way you wrote this FanFic is very different than any I have read, but in a good way. At first I was debating whether or not to continue reading it but I’m glad I did! I am a huge fan of your work and I have read every one of your stories. Keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2010 00:00 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this very much. And yea, I cried! :D |
Reviewed By: xxxshikonxxx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2010 10:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad and happy at the same time...Sad because Kagome reached the time to leave the world of living but happy because Inuyasha found her reincarnation after many years. Great story!
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2010 08:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad he found her again.
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Reviewed By: King Baka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 20:43 EDT
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Well, I didn't cry, but that still affected me quite a bit. After realizing it was Kagome (not Kaede), I scrolled back up to make sure "Hentai" was still one of the categories, and that I wasn't seeing things. I believe my next thought was, 'oh, boy.' That was a very daring and dangerous lemon you just wrote, but you handled it with such sensitivity and grace, showing not only through the words themselves, but through the way you wrote the lemon that the physical aspect was of very limited importance here. The fact that Inuyasha is still willing to lie with his aged wife itself says a lot about his character, and the true nature of their relationship. I'm not as big a fan of Inuyasha finding Kagome's reincarnations, but I guess that would be a long time to live alone... If Kagome had asked him to love her and only her always, I think he would have complied with her wish. Regardless, this story was really powerful and after getting over my initial hesitance, I enjoyed it very much.
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 19:29 EDT
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Awwww... Awesome! I love it!! I think I would love to read some more fan ficts that have Inuyasha and Kagome joining and separating over the years as Kagome reincarnates. Thanks! A job well done! ;-)
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Title: Still crying
Reviewed By: ananova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job. You made me cry and then smile through the tears. Not many authors show this side, because not many of us want to contemplate Inuyasha having to live without Kagome. And that was so like Kagome to insist that Inuyasha repeat that he is not a monster and is worthy of love. And to make him promise that he will find love again. And then you have Kagome/Kikyou's reincarnation show up. Nice way to show that Kagome will always find a way to be with Inuyasha. Nice work.
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Title: *Sobbing* T_T
Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 17:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God! This just.....I....I'm still crying from it T_T *sniff*. It was just so heartbreaking, and yet in some way heartwarming. This was one of the things that always concerned me when it came to Kagome's mortality. I mean, others would always write about Inuyasha dying years after her death, or her dying of sickness, by never her of old age while he remained the same. Things in life just don't seem very fair that way. I suppose it's a good way to look at things if Kagome's soul keeps coming back to Inuyasha. God, I can't see the keyboard, my eyes are still watering. Beautiful, that's all I can say about it. *Sniff*
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 15:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
made me both choke up and smile....sweet!
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Title: TT-TT (crying face)
Reviewed By: inugomelover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2010 15:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TT~TT damn!! TT~TT that has to be 8sniff* the most beautiful *sniff* and the sadest *sniff* story ive ever read!!! *breaks into histerical sobs* i really did cry!! this is the exact reason why i make it so in some way kagome lives to be as old as inuyasha and try to avoid stories to were its not but even so the story normally ends before she dies. but i couldnt stop myself and i love it anyway! (=^__^=)
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