| Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2013 22:11 EDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10
this was a good start on a story it is a shame you haven't updated it in some time...but maybe you could make your chapters a bit longer with some more back story or details still a good story idea.