| "Alone" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very well written fic. Consider it the first of what I hope will be many successes. May your ideas flow like the mighty Ganges.
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Reviewed By: Hanastai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2002 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your story is good.I like the concept and the way you lead the reader along with Kaoru.I even felt lonely myself.I realize that continuing the story would break the point of it, but it leaves the reader wanting more.Pretty good job.I suggest you write more fics. |
Reviewed By: RL On: November 25, 2001 11:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was interesting to see why Karou wants company.
You should continue the story to the next day. |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 15, 2001 20:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the way you portray Kaoru. You have a very pretty writing style. ^_^ |
