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Reviewed By: Lord Aries Greymon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story, poor writing style. You can do much better than you did. Even though some of the people are out of character, I can actually see how they could get that way. Sincerely, Lord Aries Greymon
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Reviewed By: Ranchan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 07:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
very ooc but an ok read.
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Reviewed By: garrruuuuda-chan On: February 02, 2003 11:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
COOL!!!^_^
keep going. |
Reviewed By: CRose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 05:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude, fix the formting and I'll give this a shot. I can't read it as it is right now. Sorry. |
