| "Kagome's Dark Return" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: sarah86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2011 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow you made her in to evil bitch. I like your little self role plays at the end but find them OOC.Oh well they are still cute.Hope you post soon. |
Reviewed By: sarah1986 On: March 13, 2011 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't mind the spelling mistakes i can still read it and i know what your say thats better then some storys and your right you can always come back and fix it as for the story i like it. |
Reviewed By: Irk On: March 13, 2011 17:11 EDT
Comment/Review:
Sango... her name is Sango, not Songo. |
Reviewed By: Avidreader On: March 08, 2011 18:25 EST
Comment/Review:
I think this is an interesting story line with a lot of potential, but your spelling errors are so numerous that one has to try to decipher what you are saying rather than enjoying the plot... I think you should try to proof read the chapters or find a beta before posting more. Other than the difficulty reading your writing, it is a neat concept and would love to see you continue it further when you have time. |
