| "Sweet Vanilla" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Mariye On: July 25, 2004 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your work and the way you portrayed his life growing up.
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Reviewed By: no one On: October 14, 2003 08:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm... the Kazusa reminds me of a certain corrupt monk..
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Reviewed By: UltraM2000 On: September 24, 2003 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I seriously felt my eyes stinging at the end of the 5th chapter. This is one of the sweetest, most insightful chibi-Gojyo POV fics I've ever read, a rarity in itself. I don't get out of the Saiyuki section at FF.Net much, and it is always a joy to see a writer taking pains over grammar, style and characterisation. The touch of snappy humour running through the fic kept things very interesting, too. Kudos! ^o^/
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 23:50 CDT
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This is a beautiful story about a tragic tale.
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Reviewed By: Pixie252 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2002 11:11 CST
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Wow. This is a very well written story. Child-abuse is a very difficult topic to write, and sometimes it is very hard to write about how the victim feels. You have done a good job of writing about how Gojyo feels about himself, and how his "mother" and Jien affect him. Please, keep up the amazing work. |
Reviewed By: K-Meyleon Sha On: October 14, 2002 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, Gojyou is my favorite character of all time.. And this ficcie is the precious to my eyes, I saw all the sweetness and the vulnerability of this man. Thank you for sharing his tragic childhood, with such beautiful words for a sad but true subject...
You should continue. |
Reviewed By: Shumea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a reaaly nice fic... So sad... So sweet... So many people write Gojou POV, though... But I think you fic is really nice. Thanks for sharing it with us.
*Shumea* |
