| Reviewed By: ThatDarnCat On: April 15, 2011 23:58 EDT|
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10Comment/Review:
I read it. And...fail. Do you have any idea how stupid it is not to give your character a name? Hell, even an overly used name like Sakura or Reyne would be better than "She". And, to be perfectly honest, it gets rather annoying reading a character like Rei gush over someone we don't know. Why should we even care about this "She" character? "She" has no name. "She" has no characteristics. "She" has no point other than for Rei to gush over. So, she has a daughter, huh? Well, looks like she didn't wait around for Rei like he did with her. Brilliant. Sorry, but I didn't enjoy this story one little bit. It's too short and bland. If you had written about a character that was known, then maybe it could have been a sweet story. But it wasn't. And "She" isn't an interesting character.