Reviewed By: Yo Yo On: September 06, 2001 23:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Emotion. This had very little of it. Yamato had pretty much no reaction to Taichi's little problem. He didn't sound shocked or anything. Other then the 'it was the most amazing experience' thing, Yamato was deviod of emotion. It seemed rushed. This has the possibilty or becoming a great fic if you you would spend a little more time on it. |
