| "The love of the moon" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: YOU ARE INSANE
Reviewed By: rainsoul [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pairing made goose bumps erupt all over my neck! They do so not go along together! You need to be checked into an asylum!Also, your granmar and your spelling was really bad PLUS the paragraphs are too long.(If you want to keep people interested, make the paragraphs shorter so that they can be skimmed through easily.) After all, the print on the computer isn't exactly large.
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Reviewed By: shadow/phantomness (shadowphantomness@yahoo.com) On: September 04, 2005 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I found someone else who writes Yue x Syaoran! *hugs* YAY!
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Reviewed By: Naila On: May 17, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's great, you should do more with this pairing, and ignore NoOne, they're just being stupid, ja ne minnasan!
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Reviewed By: serene_ai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2002 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry, you think so about it *shrug*, but I posted it at an other site too and the people doesn't seam so dense like you do.
I accept you don't like yaoi or yuri, but I wrote a warning for people like you. If you didn't read it, it's not my fault.
Well, I will contine writing for those people that are okay with such therms as homosexuality and maybe like that pairing ^-^
Sorry, you NoONE, for me you really ARE NOONE! |
Reviewed By: NoONE On: August 10, 2002 07:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
EWWWWWWW THATS STORY IS SICK U MUST HAVE PROBLEMS
GOD THATS DISCUSTING |
