| Title: Great story!|
Reviewed By: RedByakugan On: October 01, 2011 14:50 EDT
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Keep up the great work! I love the story already! It's suspenseful (obvious, of course, but not too obvious) and you throw in some random parts for each character that really gives the plot some realism. ;) Hope to read more!