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| "Sweet Lies" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Reviewed By: myeternalanguish On: August 14, 2013 21:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, that is seriously one of the best lemons I've ever read. I wished for a better ending, where the wolf gets the girl but oh well. That lemon made it totally worth the depressing outcome. Poor Kouga. I doubt you even read these reviews anymore but I hope you still write. Your scenes of passion are very enjoyable to read | Title: brilliant pairing
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2012 20:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such an amazing story, I love your interpretation of the characters and how you handle the pairing it is a refreshing and unique take and one that does justice to kouga, it has a tragic tone, especially at the end, there was that poignant sense of bittersweet, it made me have that clutching feeling in my chest, confusion over who I wanted to be the hero. I loved how you wrote kouga and the last chapter in particular you really portray this conflict, the way you don't make one character a bad foil just to prop up the greatness of the other, Inuyasha is still sexy and strong, and equally kouga is too, it makes the conflict more realistic when she is torn between two great men, rather than what some authors do in making a character deliberately evil or repellant just to make the choice easier. The way you had that last chapter with Inuyasha being so sweet to her and telling her he loved her, was a nice parallel to the sweet raw passion she shared with Kouga. I would really love to see you continue this, and to see what happens when Kagome and Kouga meet agin, and I also an curious to see Inuyashas reaction I wonder if he has his suspicions, especially as he wasn't her first. I miss your Kouga, I really like his character in the show and I feel that a lot of authors tend to misrepresent Kouga and not do him justice, but you really do do his character justice. | Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2012 20:12 EST
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Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the December 2011 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/winners/2011-2/december-2011/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=100 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=100 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association | Title: Congrats!!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2011 21:33 EST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/feudal/nominations/sample-page/ Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works. | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 27, 2011 19:20 EST
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Hmmm, well the second half was definately unexpected. And I for one do not wish for the story to end just yet :D But if that's what you got to do then do it. Man this story is getting complicated! I'm conflicted with what guy I should be rooting for, and I love every minute. Can't wait for the next update. | Title: Yay for Kouga and Kagome fics!
Reviewed By: SilentQuill23 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2011 22:35 EST
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Let me first start out by saying thank you for posting this. I LOVE the KougaXKagome pairing but I feel like 99.9% of KougaXKagome fics are as follows "Kagome catches Inuyasha and Kikyo together and is heartbroken. She runs, looking for comfort and finds Kouga, will love bloom!?" And while I still appreciate that they are KougaXKagome fics, the plot is tired and overdone. I really like what you've done here and like that you took it slow with your writing and description and didn't just have Kouga immediately jump her. It's nice that there was a buildup. I like that your writing itself isn't rushed either, it's obvious that you took even a little time to look over your writing to check for mistakes and that you weren't too impatient to just get everything down. Thanks again for posting this and if you are planning on continuing it, I look forward to and update soon :) | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 21, 2011 17:37 EST
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Oh Kagome...be careful of what you wish for ;D. Geez I don't even know what's going to happen next! Can't even begin to predict what will be of the next chapter. Just waiting in suspense! XD | Title: Story youre looking for...
Reviewed By: kanani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2011 16:00 EST
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First off i really enjoy your fanfics. Im always looking forward and am anxious to read the next chapters. I think the story youre looking for is called heartless by Karaumea. I love that story too and actually found it on www.ik-eternal.net | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 20, 2011 19:06 EST
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Oh yeah.. That's hott. XD I REALLY want this story to continue further, I don't want it to end! Love love love! I hope to see an update in the future. | Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2011 11:56 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And Que the guilt. Bet if Kagome had her way she'd never come out of the bathroom! Rotten Wolf. I love Koga, but he needs his comeuppance. Hmm... the vial tho.... wonder what little wonders it holds... sneaky wench. :D | Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2011 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Smoke em if ya got em! :P | Reviewed By: PotatoPancake On: November 19, 2011 21:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! This is exactly how I would picture Kouga being if he were to seduce Kagome! Not like most fanfics where he just tries to rape her... I love how sensual this is! | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: November 19, 2011 20:08 EST
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UPDATE PLEASE! AMAZING! I have never read a story where Kouga was so 'passionate' when having sex with Kagome. Usually it's rape or something along those lines, really love this, I wonder how Kagome is going to react in the 'morning after' scene...? | Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2011 20:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Words are just alluding me right now, so yeah, what TrickyD said. *nods* I mean, that was just so... and Koga was/is kinda a bad guy but isn't, then Kagome... and just how 'experienced' Koga is? so yea.. what they said. ;) Oh, you just left me a bit flustered, lol. so now am anxiously awaiting next install. :P | Title: lakdsfjalsdkfj
Reviewed By: TrickyD On: September 29, 2011 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyment factor: Change to 95 xDD What can I say except... I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!!! The fact of Kouga being an 'almost' bad guy is exhilarating!! Plus you make him so damn sexy ;D I also love Kagomes unwilling attitude to sex with Kouga. Makes it so much hotter!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! I will be forever greatful *Puppy dog eyes.* | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
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