Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2011 19:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done! I agree wholeheartedly. I too am guilty of doing the cheesy, cliche 'Inuyasha manages to confess his feelings and Kagome instantly falls into his arms without a care in the world' scenario, but I completely agree that the way you did it here was much more Canon and realistic. Now I'm off to read the sequel! |
