| "Fate's Coincidences" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2012 04:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what a great view on the way the got together so different than other stories i have read just loved every word i read.....just a great story...thank you |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2012 03:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You totally deserve more reviews for this fic. I love this fic, and the love scene was amazing. Keep up the good work. |
Title: Delicious!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this whole thing is awesome!!! I Love The Sex Scenes And Where She's Asking And Thinking And He's Answering And Thing |
Reviewed By: rivruskende On: April 20, 2012 05:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story, it is well written and I enjoy it very much! Thanks for writing |
Reviewed By: rivruskende On: March 22, 2012 11:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it so much. It's been a while since I read something so good. Well written, keep up the good work, I am waiting for a update! |
Title: Heeeheeee
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2012 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like thie slip up bulma made about the clothes, and how vegeta ignored her and did what she said the first time!!! oh and the blutz is make a saiyan transform into a Oozaru! |
Reviewed By: DaniHime86 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2012 23:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Really love reading this story. It's very enjoyable. Please update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2012 09:35 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By all means, get carried away with those naughty thoughts. I don't mind at all. As long as they're steamy b/v moments like that, lol. Btw, I think u meant to use the word "fate" not "faith" in this chapter, or maybe even the title? Hope I'm not being pushy. Just wanted to let u know. |
Title: AWESOME!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2012 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy like the way plotted this story!!! the detail is amazing in this story. |
Title: WOW!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2012 10:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2012 12:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this on ffn, but decided to review here. Will there be a difference in ur fic since it's on this site? Btw, I'm a big fan of your writing. |
