Reviewed By: dark thief Rikku On: February 18, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i first decided to read this fic, i thought "no way could the writer redo what was already the best and most perfect part of the game" but i guess i was wrong! you kept everything, word for word, and added the things, like yuna's introspect, that i thought should have been there from the beginning. And after they returned.. with the ending, it couldn't have been more perfect! I loved this scene, which is still my favorie in the game, and am very amazed at how well youi recreated it! so, great job! out of all the fics similar to this i've read, yours, i'd have to say, reigns surpreme for caracter development, stickig true to the storyline, and making up and ending well worthy of squaresoft :) |
