| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2012 14:19 EDT
Overall Rating: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Interesting concept. I was a little confused so I appreciate your explanation at the end there, and I also applaud you for trying to bring to life an odd idea that came to you in a dream. I've had a few random Inuyasha-based dreams myself since I started writing fanfic, and a couple of those concepts have worked their way into a story or two as well. I definitely don't think this universe needs to be expanded; there's really nothing more to say. Seems to me this idea just came to you and so you had to write it down to get it out of your head, and now you're free from its burden. I did like it though; Inuyasha would definitely send his family away if he could to prevent a would-be disaster.