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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: sanelyinsane7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2013 22:24 EST
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I love love loved the perspective taking in this story. It gives it such depth. Its not just a narration its a detailed look into the mind of the characters. God I love Vegeta and Trunks in this. Amazing. I also love how mentally strong Bulma is and how Yamcha is not a jerk. LOVELY jobb |
Reviewed By: Tracybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2011 10:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this fic. I love the way you put sections in of the characters view of ths situation. It made it interesting especially seeing into Vegeta's mind. |
Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 23:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am just discovering DBZ, and have gone in search of good fanfic to understand the characters better. Yours was just great. I loved the dynamics of the power struggle between the two, and the way nothing really came easy for this couple. But it did happen, despite them. And I felt that you kept them totally in character, and managed to keep Vegeta not only his egotistical, selfish self, but strangely likeable as well. Your fic certainly made me want to stand in Bulma's shoes for awhile. Great stuff.
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Title: i loved it
Reviewed By: vegeta lover On: April 22, 2005 23:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it i cryed can you believe it cried dough it was weird cause i usually just like the lemons thats it but this had no lemon but still it was wow
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Reviewed By: paulf2k On: April 03, 2005 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was truly one of the most amazing pieces of literature i have ever read. I have never before been compelled to read of my own will as I am now, due to this story. Ive put off studying for exams just to finish reading through every chapter. Truly, you are a very talented individual. Best wishes.
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Reviewed By: silver wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2004 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I really liked it!
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Reviewed By: Angela On: September 12, 2004 08:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's by far the most beautiful B/V three years before story I've read. I commend you for this masterpiece that you have created. It's exquisite and I doubt that I would find anything like it.
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Reviewed By: silver wolf (can't long in) On: September 04, 2004 22:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it, though I'm not big on first person, it was really cool, and very original, I didn't feel as though I was reading something I had already read in another fic., so that is good. I may read some more of your stuff and if you write a sequile I'm there.
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Reviewed By: Angela On: January 17, 2004 21:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! never again will I read a more moving piece of writing than this. It fits perfectly into the storyline and makes perfect sense. I truly believe this is what could of happened. By using real situations in the series, its hard to belive whats real and whats not! The uniqueness of the writing style is INdescribable. The way you switch from each characters thought is amazing. It's never out of character at all!! Only, I think the whole Bulma/Vegeta pair is unlikly entirely but no one has ever written such a realistic story as this. I REALLY hope you will make a sequel and SOON! Best of luck AnGeLA
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Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 08, 2002 06:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. You put such feeling into the fic including the bonds which is a secret love of mine in b/v fanfics. Also when you kept to the timeline you explained the time frame in extreme detail with emotion from the three main characters Future Trunks, Vegeta and Bulma. Overall an acutely enjoyable fic. so please keep up the good work in any other writings you've done.
Oh, by the way I congratulate you on your use of words and terrific spelling and grammar. |
Reviewed By: christabveleve On: August 16, 2002 23:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, double wow, I loved the story. |
Reviewed By: christabveleve On: August 16, 2002 23:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, double wow, I loved the story. |
Reviewed By: aiko On: August 16, 2002 19:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best B/V fanfics i have read. i love how you kept bulma's and vegeta's character in line to what the anime shows
it's a shame that not a lot of other people have read this. to make it easier to find, i suggest that you say that this is a dragonballz fanfic where it says anime: |
Reviewed By: killarri [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 18:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say that this is an amazing fic and it's among my favorites. I wish I could write like that! Anyway, write more please!!! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 16:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story!!! Every well written. I'm looking forward to the sequel!!! ^_^ |
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