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"Challenge Destiny Movie Madness: July - Thriller/Horror" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX  On: October 19, 2012 16:57 EDT
Comment/Review:
if you were to read this during a thunderstorm at night and the elecricity goes out ESPCIALLY IF YOU READ IT WITH THE XENOSAGA SOUND TRACK ON YOU TUBE THE SONG OF NEPHILIM AND ALBEDOS THEME OH GOD!!!!!! OF COURSE IF YOU READ IT IN THE DARK AS WELL AS THE OTHER THINGS CAN WE SAY FUCKIN FREAKY!!!! it scared the piss outta me and i had the lights on its daylight out and its theres no thunderstorm goin on! lucky my phone didnt go off while i read this or right after or i really would have pissed my pants. laugh all you want i dont care but just imagine your in my shoes
 Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX  On: October 19, 2012 14:32 EDT
Comment/Review:
AWSOME STORY VERY CREEPY ESPCIALLY IF YOU READ IT WITH THE XENOSAGA SOUND TRACK ON YOU TUBE THE SONG OF NEPHILIM AND ALBEDOS THEME OH GOD!!!!!! OF COURSE IF YOU READ IT IN THE DARK AS WELL AS THE OTHER THINGS CAN WE SAY FUCKIN FREAKY!!!!
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 02, 2012 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
For some reason at first I was expecting more of a suspense thing but with a non-horror ending, like Kagome was afraid but for no real good reason, so at first in 'The Horrors of School' I was envisioning a massive food fight, the stains on the ground spilled food, then at the first mention of 'creatures' outside the door for some obscure reason my first thought was muddy dogs, LOL. Didn't realize it was real monsters until she slapped an ofuda on the door and it actually glowed, but I still thought it was cute because of the 'Revenge of the Nerds' twist. Chapter 2 and 3 I really liked, like a classic horror story, and chapter 4; I like that you're revealing there are youkai in her time. Of course, I also like that Inuyasha is saving her at the end so each mini-story has a happy ending even though the danger was real. Chapter 5 was kind of funny, in a really creepy way, and I loved chapter 6. Chapter 7 was nice and canon and chapter 8 was nice and creepy. Well, I guess I don't need to comment on every single entry, huh? They were all awesome! Especially that five-parter at the end there. I like your flair for leaving that feeling of dread at the end, as you did in many of them, the others as they walk away not noticing the evil eyes watching their departure, LOL. Never seen zombie unicorns before, either, so that was a really cool and unique idea. Who cares that unicorns aren't Japanese? I loved it. I loved all of it! Awesome job!

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