| "You" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Molpadia On: October 27, 2013 07:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Juicy and yummy, I just love the way you write |
Reviewed By: Your Biggest Fan On: March 26, 2013 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I mean you have by far the best dbz fics to ever be written. In one of your fixation chapters you mentioned that you were going to post your stories in some other site. Would you please *blinks like Puss n' Boots* tell us where? Greetings. |
Reviewed By: Tini123 On: March 07, 2013 23:01 EST
Comment/Review:
Amazing!!! so glad you're back :) |
Reviewed By: Ani12345 On: February 18, 2013 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! as usual your fics are amazing!! so glad you decided to show up :) |
Reviewed By: Annony On: January 31, 2013 06:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! I was so pleased to see another fic from you - it’s been a while! I really enjoyed the change of style, and the dialogue was great as usual. You may be the best B/V author ever, you’re certainly my favourite anyway, you write them both so well. You keep Bulma strong and feisty, and Vegeta’s always in character but with a hint of something more going on underneath. And I have to say, I don't think anyone can write erotica as well as you, you have a real gift! |
Reviewed By: Veggie Kun On: January 27, 2013 10:42 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Raw, sexy and hot, hot, hot!. There are many three year stories out there, but this little one-shot lime to me tells pretty much the basics on how they got together in the first place. I keep going back to read it again, fantastic job. Love your line: When vanity meets arrongance!!!!. She always considered herself irresistible, so it was more than likely that she would consider the arrogant alien prince a challenge. |
Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2012 09:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I honestly did a double-take when I got this story notice..I only just now had time to read it, and, I must say, that I had to stifle my giggles and snorts...omg, it's just SO sexy, SO funny, SO smutty...SO Bulma and Vegeta! As always, it's perfect, baby! Thank you, so very much, for this greatly appreciated gift! XD |
Reviewed By: Graidon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2012 08:30 EST
Comment/Review:
So excited to see your writing again. Writing B/V is even better. Hope to see some more stories from you. You're the best! |
Reviewed By: nynalia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2012 23:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I may have allowed a brief squeal to escape my lips when I saw an email stating you had written another fic. Excellent, as always. I really love your work and have read your b/v stories more times than I'm willing to admit. I loved the different style you used to write this one. It was unique. Thank-you for another fun one-shot! |
Reviewed By: DARIANNE On: November 20, 2012 18:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome comeback! I missed you tons!!! |
Reviewed By: Ambience [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2012 04:44 EST
Comment/Review:
How delicious! Your B/V stories never disappoint, you truly are a master craftsman (or should I say woman) of smut. Pure, unapologetic smut and I love it! I recently have found myself coming back to reading B/V fics, after so many years of thinking I was done with this fandom, it seems we fangurls can never quite get over this couple ;) Please write more when you find you have the inspiration! I have been reading your fics for years and you will always have a fan in me. BTW Vegeta kicks crappy Christian Grey's ass into the ground ;) |
Reviewed By: VisceralMel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2012 03:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading your stuff for years now and you never fail to disappoint. You only get better and better and this story was no different.. I enjoyed it immensely and was more than pleasantly surprised when I saw my inbox had a notice that you'd uploaded something. Hope all is well and good in your world. |
