Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
::sniffles:: That's so beautiful... they are all so clueless and yet they are great. The first chapter did look a bit shorter than the others @_@ I guess it's a bit hard to write from Hisoka's POV. ^-^ Lol! I like the way you described inu-Tsuzuki ^o^ how cute. Watari's chapter was quite a bit confusing. He felt a pang, huh? I thought something got to do unrequited love in Watari's case. Poor guy.
Third chapter was a bit confusing, but alas... Hisoka figured it out, right? He'd figured it out that Watari loves him, right? And the last one seems to be drifting away too much O.o Seems like Watari has taken 2/3 of Tatsumi's spotlight. ::sighs:: Poor Tatsumi ;_; unrequited love. (Everyone loves Tsuzuki) And later on Tatsumi is acting a bit weird. Must be about his new love. ^_^ I think the part were Watari was pinching is cheek was cute ^o^.
Nice work! I'll see if I can find the sequel. I want to know what happens later on! |
