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| "Bleeding Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: dhfsadfgadgdfg On: November 07, 2002 16:38 CST
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A *CELL* romance...For christ's sake... These pre-pubescent little girls have the most fucked up fantasies...Cell of all people... YOU SICK FREAK... | Reviewed By: Ezpeanza On: November 02, 2002 00:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe how good a fic this is and it's only two pages!!! *eyes bog out* I decided I'd go back to some of the older pages cos there are alot of good fics here that some fools don't see a point in reviewing. anyway great fic and please keep writing it's very hard to find a good cell romance. | Reviewed By: flamingscouts [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 23:41 CDT
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I, the Olive Flaming Scout, have made a mistake. Please take a moment to honor this momentous occasion, for it is truly rare.
I would like to retract a statement I made in a review I left earlier. When I reread this story, there was no change in the narration. It is all in the first person.
I am sorry for any inconvience I may have caused anyone. This is the Olive Flaming Scout signing off. Over and out. | Reviewed By: flamingscouts [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2002 16:26 CDT
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You have been selected by the Flaming Scouts for a review. To be honest, I was going to flame you good, but I just can't bring myself to do it. I will however tell you some of the mistakes I saw during my quick reading of this story.
It's college, lower case and spelled like that, not Collage. Another thing is that you kept switching from first person to third person. You seriously need to pick one or the other and stick to it.
As for the storyline itself, it's original, I'll give you that much. It would be much better if it weren't a self-insertion. Honestly, I don't like those because they tend to get corny, but I can see where this might work. To be brutally honest though, I think this is just weird. A Cell romance?!? Too weird for me...
I guess that's all I have to say for now. Please think about what I've said. I do think this story has potential...Okay, this is the nicest review I've ever given. I think I'm getting sick, and if not then I'm going to make myself sick if I keep going on like this.
This is the Olive Flaming Scout signing off. Over and out. |
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