| "Sakura Falls" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: mz-dee@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: .reviewer On: March 22, 2005 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyy..i love how yu write and i love the whole idea of the story BUT yu kno wut..the story doesn't seem realistic and it's not wrkin for me. in the begining it was so good and it all fit good, no plot wholes but later on it, things jus stayed the same. sakura kept doing her stupidness and kept going back to her jukies. and syaoron was portrayed realy bad. he was so dependent on her, allways going back to her, way too forgiving and he just basically kept on eating all the supid shytt sakura fed him!! that just killed the whole thing. and in the end, shez turns out to be a little whore who's pregnant and she doesnt know who the father is, syao never ones shows his anger instead he proposes to her and she rejects it..WTF!?! but ye..i strongly think yu shud re-write..this story cud be AMAzing..really. but ye. im sorry if i sound mean. im really just giving my opinion. i was however VERY impressed by the way you wrote..it sounds like you know your stuff. i hope it wasn't from personal experience!!
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Reviewed By: tokyo rose On: July 15, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was well done, but i'm old fashioned, and this was really horrible to me... i didn't enjoy it. sorry |
Reviewed By: SakuraSyaoran4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 07:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read up to chapter 12 and I am very confused. You know when Sakura gets a call from Meiling and memories rush bach...then in the next few chapter there's a car accident & Meiling dies...was that a flashback? Cuz I am very comfused...Anywayz, I love the fic!! n_n
Ps. I luv bad Sakura Fics! |
Reviewed By: Keewi-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
AH! It's just so weird! Eating a cat? Come on! Sorry sorry |
Reviewed By: Keewi-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2002 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, you kinda went overboard there. Eating a cat, okay thats not literature it's just gross. I'm REALLY hoping things from this story are not coming from real life. I think you should just put it as an original, cause it has nothing at all to do with the card captor sakura. I really don't like it a lot. I mean it was good at first but then it got kinda crazy and very strange. Ack, it's just VERY weird and I can't get over it... |
