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| "Pint Sized!" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: AmberInferno [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2015 17:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic. Please keep writing, but what is up with
the format (Quotations) Ex. (Incase you don't know what i'm talking
about) That brought him back.
“What?â
;& acirc;‚¬ He looked down right horrified. Smiling in
victory. “And now you
see.†I don't mean to be rude but
it made the story hard to read and slightly confusing. But other
than that I really like it.
| Reviewed By: LADY SILVERFOX On: August 19, 2013 18:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHA THAT WAS SOOOOOOO FUNNY HAHAHA MIROKU SCREAMING LIKE A LITTLE GIRL HAHAHA!!!!! he's just like my friend joe becouse my friend joe when he screams he screams like a little girl also some times dresses like a girl... SERIOUSLY I AINT LYING HE REALLY DOES!!!!!! yea yea yea i know i have really wierd friends i know. |
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