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 Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: afewchoicephrases [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 20, 2015 20:49 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I have been reading fanfiction for 12 years now. The first fanfiction I ever read was based on Inuyasha. I wanted to say thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such beautiful, eloquent and well developed stories. I have never written a review (I always preferred being a silent lurker) and to be completely honest I NEVER read a story unless it is complete already. Blackout is the first story that I started that wasn't already complete and I have to say it was well worth the wait. My poor boyfriend had to suffer A LOT watching me check my email obsessively just waiting for that little notification that you posted another chapter. You have inspired me to start writing again. Okay let me stop before this gets too out of hand, lol. I hope you start another long fic soon so I have something to look forward to once again!
 Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 04, 2015 06:14 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY! Beautifully done. A truly touching, lovely ending. It'll probably upset some people but I'm actually glad that you mentioned all that stuff about Kagome's lifespan, and that in this particular story there *isn't* the fanon mating mark concept and extending her life and all that nonsense. Now don't get me wrong, I've done it plenty of times myself. Practically every story, in fact, LOL. But it's always refreshing to see them having to face the bittersweet realities of a more realistic outcome. As much as the fangirl in me likes to see that workaround, it's admittedly a cop-out for people who just don't want to face the reality of death. And they will have many, many happy years together before that happens, anyway, with plenty of children to keep Inuyasha company throughout the decades and centuries beyond. I love the vision of him becoming the patriarch of an ever-growing family. You just know that's what's going to happen. He's never going to be lonely ever again. And when it's finally his turn to die, Kagome will be waiting for him. Beautiful story!
 Reviewed By: Emrayel  On: September 04, 2015 02:53 PDT
Comment/Review:
Overall, a beautiful story. I'm glad you maintained the realistic nature in shying away from the fannon of mating bonds. Also, I really like the idea of Inuyasha being the elder guide to his lineage through the generations. I will say I think a nod to whether the bat hanyou and her mother actually ended up coming to live in their village would have been nice. But overall, I'm happy with the story.
 Title: lovely
Reviewed By: CrasyYasha  On: September 03, 2015 23:50 PDT
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I started reading this when you were about at chapter ten and eagerly awaited every update. I loved this story, so many emotions you ripped out of me. You wrapped it up beautifully, thank you for the wonderful story. Looking forward to the next one if there is one, you will forever be on my favorites list.
 Reviewed By: SleepToDream  On: September 01, 2015 08:01 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I came across this story a few months ago and I can honestly say that this is the best written fiction I have had the pleasure to read here. You have incredible talent. Keep up the amazing work! I am waiting patiently, with excitement, for the next chapter :)
 Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 17, 2015 19:02 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awwww... Wonderful update! I absolutely loved how you handled the wedding scene, and Inuyasha saying his own vows, and the friendly banter between he and Jii-chan afterwards. The bathing scene was funny too, especially when the oni attacked. I can so picture a naked Inuyasha with transformed Tetsusaiga propped on his shoulder, LOL. They definitely should bring her bow and arrows with them, just in case. You never know, right? And yeah, it's the Shikon that attracted the oni in the first place, but I agree with Inuyasha. They need to let her family see the baby before they purify the jewel and presumably close the well as a result. Lovely wedding night scene, nudge nudge wink wink. I usually read and review this bad boy over on FF, but not when there's awesome adult rated stuff to be had! LOL. I can't say I blame either of them for wanting to postpone intercourse, all things considered, but I love what Kagome decided to do to make it up to him. I love that she decided to make it up to him. There's just something about a writhing, moaning, helpless Inuyasha that's sooooo... Mmmmm... What was I talking about? Oh yeah, anyway, good update!
 Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2015 23:42 PDT
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It takes a masterfully written scene to bring me to tears. Only 4 stories have managed to do it. Your scene for Kikyou's death was the first fanfiction to do it. And When Kagome was rejecting him, I legit felt my heart in my throat. This is definitely a work of art.
 Reviewed By: Madi  On: June 16, 2015 13:19 PDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's finally coming to an end! This has been such a great story! I've been checking back on it every other week to see if you've updated. Haha. I'm glad Inuyasha has his body back and Kikyo is finally at peace. You gave her a great ending. Can't wait for the next chapter!
 Reviewed By: Majicman55 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 03, 2015 15:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed following your story. It is fascinating how Hakago is now, in a childish way, similar to how Sesshoumaru used to be. He disdains humans and anyone who is weak. His main goal is to acquire power, and he measures himself according to the opponent he can beat. Of course there are significant differences, between the past Sesshoumaru and the current Hakago, but there are ways in which their motivations are strikingly similar. I wondered if you had thought about it. Anyway, good story. I look forward to your continuation.
 Title: Too Many Feels
Reviewed By: inuamante  On: May 02, 2015 13:05 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, dude, I love your fanfics. I'm not eeven going to lie. But,I'm almost to the point of dreading to read the updates. I hate what you're doing to InuYasha. He fucked up, but no one deserves to be tortured this long. I know that you have to have a plan to get InuYasha and Kagome together, but I think that I'm going to have sit this one out until you've finished with the story. It kinda makes me sad because your one of the few writers that I still read from this fandom. Either way, good luck with this story.
 Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2015 10:01 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This story is so amazing, fun and heartwarming. I am very perplexed as to why no one has reviewed it. It's incredible and I hope more people get to enjoy it as much as I am.
 Title: I can finally review
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 10, 2015 12:22 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Jebus...I'm writing this after months of not being able to review. I started this at chap one. I had no doubt it would be good. I didn't know it would be so good it would hurt to read. I had to stop for a while it was so angsty. But I'm caught up now. I wish I'd waited to come back only so I could read more. And just so's you know a fan fic has never made me cry before, and I've read a lot of them, but this one has had me chocked up on numerous occasions. I truly hope they get their happy ending soon cause you've tortured them more then takahashi san could at her darkest. I'll be waiting patiently for the next installment.
 Reviewed By: cat57678421  On: January 03, 2015 23:34 PST
Comment/Review:
Great story hope u continue soon.
 Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 27, 2014 15:23 PST
Comment/Review:
That was amazing! Please keep writting!!! and let us know what's going on with Kagome :D
 Title: Congrats!!
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 24, 2014 15:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
Congratulations! Your fiction has won an award from the Feudal Association for the April 2014 term! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our Yahoo Group, where the nominating and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Our website is located here: http://feudal.fav.cc/ This terms' fiction winners list can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/winners/2014-2/april-2014/ Authors, you may retrieve your awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=120 Links to all of the awards, past or present, can be found here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/index.php Please pick up "site only" awards here: http://feudal.fav.cc/gallery/thumbnails.php?album=120 Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~The Feudal Association
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