| "Broken heart" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: I like anthor chapter please.
Reviewed By: digigirl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sooooooooooooooooo cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I think you should make anthor one.Well I just have a queation what is Aibou is it a Yuig. Well then I can say this. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks!!!!One more thing is Seto real ...g....o...o....d to *Start luaghing* Yuig that is fuuny besaues Seto in the show he never like that sorry. *Giggling* Seto is alaway mean to yuig and kind use to that. *Start to luagh again hard* S.....................ORRY! BUT IT JUST FUNNY TO ME. well update ok thanks.
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Reviewed By: ZellDincht [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2002 11:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Make another chapter! That wasn't angst enough!!! Do more pleez! I am a blood suckin victim!!!!
Oh yeah, I don't know what the guy above is talking about. But you should continue |
Reviewed By: little aibou On: October 15, 2002 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
here's my opinion. KEEP GOING!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you should either continue this fic or write a sequel. There's more that you could have about Yami Bakura and Ryou-chan. (It also sounded like Seto-kun had a crush on Yugi-chan. ^^;;) I really like this fic. Hope you get more ideas!! Ja ne, minna-chan!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Cecilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2002 13:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
im not happy! u updated this fic, not ur other one? Im pissed! |
Reviewed By: happy lil' slasher On: October 12, 2002 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very cool. None like no other ( I not sure if that makes sense. |
Reviewed By: Meg On: October 08, 2002 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was really good! just one thing. maybe you can build up more to yugi's leaving. like, more times that his friends desterted him...etc. but then again, taking off like that is a thing a person of his age would do. even without a whole lot of reasons. anyway, i love it! keep it up! |
Reviewed By: little aibou On: September 26, 2002 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!! I THINK THE STORIES WHERE YUGI AND YAMI ARE AIBOU'S ARE SOOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!! i'm a girl obviously..... |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2002 09:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
not bad man you've got some talent put more soon dud i'll be around checking everyday |
Reviewed By: Li's Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2002 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I hope you add some more to it soon. It's interesting, I've never read a Yu-gi-oh story where Yugi feels like his friends are ignoring him. |
Reviewed By: Helteage On: August 22, 2002 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story. Keep it going! I would love to read it. Please let me know when you update! I can't wait to read the rest! My email is Helteage@aol.com.
~Helteage |
Reviewed By: Noname On: August 18, 2002 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very very cool. I read lots of fan fic from yu gi oh and I have seen no story like that. I hope to read the rest when you write it. I'm sorry, I really don't understand the rating numbers, If ten is the highest or the lowest, but I meant ot put all the numbers as good as they go. (ooops I forgot to tell you my name. I'm Martha- Raye and I'm eleven and I live in Deleware.) |
Reviewed By: SilverWolf315 On: August 18, 2002 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed your fic so far. So far your plot is very interesting, and I really like your ideas.
I hope Yugi will be alright in the end, but this is an angst fic. This is a really good start, and I can't
wait to read the next chapter. |
