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"A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ]
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 Title: awesome sauce
Reviewed By: random reviewer  On: September 03, 2015 13:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
Loved it, the story has been good from start to finish, and even seems to be getting better as chapters go on!
 Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: Deadpool-girl  On: August 17, 2015 07:28 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved the new chapter and all the ones before it, please update soon. It is such a wonder to read and I am brimming in anticipation for some InuKag action.
 Reviewed By: alejandra243  On: August 16, 2015 18:29 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm so in love with your portrayal of these characters. Kagome doesn't see what's so great about inuyasha and she's right. Oh, he's so rich-so what. She's an honest to goodness nice person. Too good for that dog boy as he is now. And even though I'm in love with her stance and not falling for him, I really wanted them to kiss. I know I know. It goes against everything I just said. But gosh darn that sexually tension! I like mostly one shots because 1. They story is complete and 2. I get the characters in bed faster. So I'm going to be hoping for the ending sooner than later but you take your sweet time! Ignore my demands of "Kiss! Kiss! Kiss!" You're doing awesome.
 Reviewed By: alejandra243  On: July 30, 2015 18:49 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see other reviewers feel the same way I do! I like your story very much. I like how kagome is cool with inuyasha doing what he pleases, like it doesn't affect her. And it shouldn't as he's done nothing but have sex with other women. I'm all for inu/kag pairings, but I wouldn't be mad to see Kouga get some love first. Inuyasha is such a jerk. I'm sure some big break through is coming, but id wish he stop his womanizing ways to make it seem like he means it. And why does he like kikyou so much? Ugh. Kagome can't even go on a date but you can bang her look alike, get caught by Kagome, bang a bunch of other chicks and it's totally cool.....This may seem like a negative review but it's not! Im just venting about that bad dog demon!
 Reviewed By: Kai83  On: July 29, 2015 09:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Since your chapters are really short, you should update faster. Or rather make it longer if you won't update regularly
 Reviewed By: zellie  On: July 29, 2015 00:33 PDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you continue to post new chapters, I'm a big fan of this story. Keep the chapters coming, I can't wait to read them :)
 Reviewed By: Kai83  On: July 20, 2015 00:18 PDT
Comment/Review:
Uh oh! Both of them are playing a dangerous game and it's only in a matter of time before one of them breaks and I get it'll be inuyasha if only he would get his head out of his ass
 Reviewed By: Kai83  On: July 18, 2015 12:34 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love your portrayal of kagome, she's feisty, knows her mind and doesn't let anyone walk over her. I like how she puts inuyasha in his place. Pls update immediately. Looking forward to this story's progress
 Reviewed By: random reviewer  On: July 13, 2015 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been reading your story since the beginning and it's definitely on my top reads right now, hope you continue the great work!
 Reviewed By: frostedglaze  On: July 03, 2015 21:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
Is Kagome a miko? I would love to see her fry Inuyasha.He is so unworthy of her.
 Reviewed By: frostedglaze  On: July 03, 2015 21:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
I hope she tells him to go to hell. He was so happy that he would keep his money and get to have Kikyo bit as soon as Kagome wanted the same deal he acts like a caveman!!! I am so Kagome/Kouga right now. If Inuyasha can have sex with Kikyo, and did, in front of Kagome. She can have sex with Kouga, and she should. Oh please let her have sex with the wolf demon, please!
 Reviewed By: frostedglaze  On: July 03, 2015 21:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
I am so happy that Kagome is open to dating. She and Kouga would be great together. Especially since Inuyasha isn't even sorry about what he did to Kagome. The hell with him!
 Reviewed By: frostedglaze  On: July 03, 2015 21:38 PDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, so Inuyasha really did have sex with Kikyo and Kagome saw it. I was just hoping that Inuyasha and Kikyo were both naked and were about to have sex.....sigh. Kouga is perfect for Kagome. I adore this story, but please don't make Kagome a pushover who allows Inuyasha to get away with disrespecting her. And a wolf demon who is also in premed, and chivalrous would make a great sex partner. Especially since it appears that Inuyasha has also had sex with the receptionist who treated Kagome like crap.
 Reviewed By: frostedglaze  On: July 03, 2015 21:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Inuyasha is just disgusting!! Not to mention a fool!! How can he not see that Kikyo is a gold digging whore with no morals?! She wanted to have sex with a married man, AND contest a will that does not concern her?! Hmmm, get a brain Inuyasha. As for Kagome, there is such a thing as being too nice and passive. I hope she outs Inuyasha, or takes his inheritance. I truly hope she does not give Inuyasha her virginity. He is too dirty to deserve it, and not because he is a hanyou, but because he is slime.
 Reviewed By: frostedglaze  On: July 03, 2015 21:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really hope this is a misunderstanding.
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