| "A deal with a demon" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: zellie15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2015 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! It's such a different inuyasha fanfic that I've read
in a while. I hope to read more!!
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Reviewed By: inulovergirl90 On: June 16, 2015 10:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
I really hope you didn't give up on this story! I love it. I don't
care what anyone says yes it might be similar to other storys but
hell people like this type of story. Please please update! Its nice
to find new inuyasha stories once in awhile especially since ive
been reading inu fan fics for atleast 10 years!
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Reviewed By: Booyaka On: May 28, 2015 07:13 PDT
Comment/Review:
This story is good but it seems to follow every other story of
arrogant promiscuous rich in some type of way Inuyasha and innocent
naive gullible Kagome who can't stand up for herself and gives in.
In this chapter she is slowly falling for him seemingly ignorant of
the fact that he is self absorbed and man-whorish. Her thoughts
toward the end of him not seeing her as anything other than
business deal or conquest attesting to her underlying desire to be
more to him. Again the story isn't bad, just overdone.
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Reviewed By: kyriamei On: May 21, 2015 05:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
the status said it is complete but it isnt... but i love the story,
please update..... looking forward... :)
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Reviewed By: inulovergirl90 On: May 16, 2015 15:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story please hurry and update!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2015 14:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait to find out what exactly Kagome walked in
on. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 21:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Did she have to be a virgin? I hope she just wore the hood to
please her grandfather and nothing more.He doesn't deserve a pure
Kagome, after he has been with Kikyo, after they became engaged. If
she is ( so unfair) then I hope she looses it to anyone who isn't
Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 21:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
If he gives Kikyo a call, then Kagome should call up Kouga. If the
mutt can have a side piece so can Kagome, fair is fair. So why
isn't Kagome's father in debt? Shouldn't that moron be the one with
all the financial problems? Not his innocent family?
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 20:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
So is Kagome going to be a miko with powers in this story? She
needs them so she can sit Inuyasha whenever she wants.
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Reviewed By: frostedglaze On: May 10, 2015 20:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
He is such a pig! I really hope he doesn't cheat on Kagome. And I
hope Kagome isn't a virgin either.
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